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drive

your words always held me
paper breaths and ink ejaculations
hot on my stomach
slip slide right into my core

there was always this place
fingertip fires
pressed lips
tongue tip promises kept
shadow thrusts
the girl I wanted to be

feel the plea on my skin
escaping every pore

your outline
against the window
was everything
is

show me that place
timeless
slow
image burn necessity
possibilities untouched
return and begin

lead
and you know
where I’ll be

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On Monday December 24th, 2007, italianbella (281) writes:

absolutely wonderful such longing and desire lol i wish I could feel as enraptured as you:)

On Saturday August 11th, 2007, Winterwords (19) writes:

So easy to relate to - still holding my breath, because I fear to break the spell it has over me...

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Mab (997) writes:

this was wonderful...I must read more of your work

On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, flying_fox (769) writes:

Raina Raina Raina... this was just slipslidey loveliness. Reading it brings a little smile to my lips. Oh happy happy happy days. Great to read you again. Hope to chat with you soon! xxx

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:

perfectly done.

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, dying angel (1328) writes:

"your words always held me paper breaths and ink ejaculations" i absolutely adore this piece.

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

ripped me to shreds, im glad you have posted again. ps- love the floyd quote

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Lynaes (1125) writes:

Raina! You posted and I'm so very happy that you did.. this is just.. beautiful. The ending was like a promise of always being there, and that is a gift to cherish. You were always able to create strong emotions..

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Lynaes (1125) writes:

Post again Raina! Because I love your work, and so does DP.. and * is starting to think you don't fancy him anymore. Much love to you dear.

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, capt_funguy (993) writes:

who the hell is - " * " ?

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, girlafraid (579) writes:

* is everything and nothing. * cannot be explained by mortals. * began as a mistake in the chat box, i think. Kim and I liked to take the chat box over, * was our pal.

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, capt_funguy (993) writes:

methinks we should just quit our jobs. you are the perfect one, thankyou for this, it's so beautiful ... we need to get away, like soon.

On Monday February 5th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1064) writes:

"tongue tip promises kept" Goodness, you have a lovely way of stating things originally. And this piece...the longing for a moment to be relived...excellent! ~*Beth*~

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