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endurance

He’s really out there
a semi-conscious state of self induced indulgence
whirlwinds of panoramic interest
settle him into explanations and justifications

he’s doing quite well, actually
living solely in his moments

My face might be her,
to him
my words,
her flapping red flags

but I am different
I move along quietly
slowly detaching the threads
regrettably undetected

how much more
before I break into a run?

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On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (450) writes:

i must say i love the bluntness. wonderflly written

On Wednesday February 21st, 2007, Mab (995) writes:

"slowly detaching the threads regrettably undetected"...incredible write!

On Monday February 19th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

hopefully you already broke into a sprint by now, love the blunt, subtle imegry, and how you seem to keep your heart on your sleeve in this piece

On Thursday January 18th, 2007, flying_fox (769) writes:

This piece reminded me so much of a person I tried to love/help who broke my heart. I ended up running. *hugs to you* xxx

On Friday December 22nd, 2006, missanthropic (48) writes:

i love the feeling of being fractured that this piece has...not quite a break but potentially twice as dangerous. it really is very well crafted.

On Sunday December 17th, 2006, capt_funguy (993) writes:

i've yet to meet anyone who needs such a serious shaking. you're all he's got but he doesn't get it . be strong cookie ... funguy

On Sunday December 17th, 2006, Zen (623) writes:

..and id say put on your nikes and get ready for a sprint man! lol

On Sunday December 17th, 2006, Zen (623) writes:

niiiiceee. ew i hate the word "flapping". but i like the poem anyway =)

On Saturday December 16th, 2006, urbanhumility (1362) writes:

concise and sharp as a blade...................well done.......urban

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