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scattered
but i've got a handful
of complete accomplishments
the genius lies
where the abstract meets the concrete
clenched fist meets the glass
and the everything that i've been holding together
hits the ground
running

"how does she do it?"
but the answer is in the secret
i'm just a butterfly trying to find a place
to land
comfort is a hurricane
flickering decisions
where choices
are only
the eye of the storm




© 2006 girlafraid

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On Saturday October 14th, 2006, Grim_Sorrow (87) writes:
wow... uhh, not sure what to say. I'm truly impressed, such depth in simplicity, it strikes a chord. well done.


On Wednesday August 16th, 2006, K_Love (693) writes:
"and the everything that I've been holding together hits the ground." A feeling I've been dealing with lately. This hit me, wonderful write.


On Wednesday August 16th, 2006, Solace (1425) writes:
I like that first part, thats brilliant that is...makes me smile a secret smile and nod as if I know more than I ought to, or even more than I actually know...thanks :)


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, An Expired Member (31) writes:
"comfort is a hurricane"- great write. *alone*


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, dying angel (1351) writes:
"the genius lies where the abstract meets the concrete"...wow this hit me hard. very , very powerful and definately something to think about.



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