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Oh, Foolish.

Blatantly sarcastic painted plastered scars.
Brilliantly colored friction of fractions in the fiction
Of imaginary fairytale landscapes in the
Black of your eyes.

Ambiguity within a sphere of
Perfect articulation..

So swallow your injuries with sedatives
We’re dancing tonight.
Faithless stars flicker in our face-off
Of foul words and splintered vertebrae.

And when you kick off your shoes
Know you’re staying
In this room for two.
But only for as long as you’d like.

The ocean is too broad and wide
And your eyes can wander waking wishful
Wistful thoughts of whatever you
Want to do.

And when you go, I’ll miss you.
Listen faintly for your breathing..
Still believing.
You’re always breathtaking.





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On Monday June 25th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
you know how to kill me with your words.... every time.


On Saturday May 26th, 2007, sIo (895) writes:
the last stanza i really adore. there was a lot of alliteration but you made it flow well. awesome write.


On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, Railway_Butterfly (477) writes:
oh wow. this really is lovely. i so rarely read anything here anymore and to tell you the truth i was only drawn to this because i was bored and seeing that monkey and tiger had commented on this via the feedback button


On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, Railway_Butterfly (477) writes:
led me to thinking it must be worth reading. i was certainly right. this is genuinely wonderful. i want to tell you what it is i love so much about this but i always sound so silly when i try to explain things like this in comments..


On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, Railway_Butterfly (477) writes:
so i'll give it some thought and perhaps dpmail you. thank you for sharing this, it was gorgeous and in some ways, even slightly hurtful to read.. i will enjoy coming back to this piece again. :)


On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:
wow smooth surface, I can surf this one or dive into it. It is very very compelling and seductively written. Tiger


On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1879) writes:
This is worth whoring.. *Favors and does his part* I would like to say that this is to long.. but I cant it's just perfect. kick off the shoes is my fav stanca!


On Sunday May 20th, 2007, Imsosickxxx (98) writes:
This was damn good girl!?! I mean shit!


On Sunday May 20th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (408) writes:
ooooh, breathtaking. ;)


On Friday May 18th, 2007, glasshouse (812) writes:
The ending is so powerful. Very carefully worded and beautiful. Well Done. --Jes


On Friday May 18th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (234) writes:
I love the alliteration in this piece. Sets of the greater tune than was being sung. Well done.


On Friday May 18th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
wow this is tongue tripwire for sure....a carousel of tricky language heightened to the sensory overload of licked stamp words....only this time, tastes better than any envelope...envelops the mind....brilliant poem


On Friday May 18th, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (420) writes:
i love this poem. that is simply all i can say for now.


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Army Barbie (501) writes:
Damn.


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Army Barbie (501) writes:
I mean double damn. Girl. You fucking rock my socks off.



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