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Laulena

A girl with white-lace ribbons in hair
Walks the stone path without a care in the world
Provided her innocence stays in tact
Her breath will remain motionless
And her hair will continue to wave in the breeze
Only, those white ribbons will fly away.

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On Thursday August 5th, 2004, indefined (679) writes:

thought provoking to say the least, this says so much in so few words. great stuff.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

Beautiful in everyway it guides us along in a exacting imagery...

On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, Exodus (210) writes:

i agree with capt. its almost like i saw her walking..

On Monday July 26th, 2004, capt_funguy (992) writes:

this seems so familiar ... simply a beautiful write ... funguy

On Monday July 26th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:

Enchanting, airy, wistful, captivating and indeed intelligent. This speaks on so many levels. Read like a beautiful sultry cloud of smoke. Wonderful as always Corey.

On Monday July 26th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:

heh,cool man.intelligent.great thought sublimely expressed,i wonder if everyone will get what the meaning of this was, im most impressed

On Monday July 26th, 2004, NikesRain (1424) writes:

..nice flow and imagery..it has an innocent air but touched with pessimism. Nice work

On Monday July 26th, 2004, Clementine (153) writes:

that sucks, i bet those ribbons were expensive, chasmire perhaps?

On Monday July 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

indeed, loved the descriptiveness (remember i'm mexican so if that word doesn't exist, blame my teachers)

On Monday July 26th, 2004, Soulseeker (119) writes:

Very descriptive nice flow. Bethany

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