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Smile

At times I feel alone
A broken chalice dropped by the Holy Ghost
And under the glimpse of a clouded stare
I fail to see the lining
That so closely resembled a smile

At times I feel the pull
So I push you away from life's genius
And under the failed attempt at artistry
I kill away the feeling
That almost caused me to smile

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On Thursday September 20th, 2007, steuss (145) writes:

"i kill away the feeling/that almost caused me to smile" This is a wonderful line. My favorite in the piece. i LIKE HOW you work with oppisites here.

On Saturday July 17th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_i love the Holy Ghost passage as well...this piece really overwhelmed me...and i agree with aXe...i envy your prowess.well done...again.

On Monday May 31st, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

short it may be, but the effects left imprinted on me is truly boundless. written with such prowess. i liked it a lot. :)

On Monday May 31st, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

the image and the strange essence that seems to appear in the back of my mind when i read your works is always something to look forward to, A broken chalise dropped by the Holy Ghost

On Monday May 31st, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

And under the glimpse of a clouded stare , my favourite part ...truly inspired creative and unique art

On Monday May 31st, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

I agree with June, just breath taking.. You have a very beautiful and unique talent. Amazing Tracer. ~L

On Sunday May 30th, 2004, evolve (2228) writes:

So wistful...your works are worth waiting for.

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