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I found this while deleting files on my school computer account. Better late than never I suppose.
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Shallow and shallow
Though deeper I ride
Into crimson wrapped candy
And cards full of lies

I see with my eyes
The killing of dreams
Voices all knowing
Knowing nothing

‘Tis Valentine’s Day
And I sit here alone
Waiting for love to call
But not watching the phone

I will process data
Inside of my mind
Receiving from television
A world so unkind

Rekindled, I hoped
Since I was but eight
A sense of well-being
And less sense of hate

But as long as the rockets,
Glare red in the night
Bringing with them terror
Hope in false sight

I will sit here,
Upon my cushion of silk
Breathing in incense
And breathing out guilt






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On Thursday July 7th, 2005, SorrowSoul (73) writes:
This was a great read. The ending is perfection. Well done.


On Sunday November 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
paints nice pictures. very clear and precise, yet vague and mysterious. very nice!


On Thursday April 1st, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:
I got to think of some of the "old ones" while reading this. These lines, I see with my eyes The killing of dreams Voices all knowing Knowing nothing .... Its classic. Many before you would not have made line shift in 4 there but 2.


On Thursday April 1st, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:
But its changed with alot of poets just before, and especialy after first world war. So that makes for a cool mix. The same with the last stanza ...


On Thursday April 1st, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:
Also totaly classic, and cant be written if forced as I see it. So all in all this interest me. I will read more in time ;) .. Tiger


On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
the last stanza was particularly good...every line was expressed 'just so' to convey your emotion. Lovely. Fox


On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Lynaes (1133) writes:
So bright with imagery and lavish with beauty.. The last stanza blew my mind. "Breathing in incense and breathing out guilt". Absolute perfecting, I love this. ~L


On Tuesday March 30th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
Aw, how sad....good for something you just stumbled across. =) Morb


On Thursday April 8th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:
i Likes lots, makes me smile -Crazy-



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