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Sensations evade capture under a canopy of stars,
Frost bitten on concrete shells,
Leaving amblotic scars,
Every crack in the asphalt brought by constant sighing:
Echoes from shivering maples at bay,
To be rooted and trapped with parasites
And hybrinating worms,
Soil churns as long dead squirm beneath the wall,
Out of life,
Out of time,
Blood from ice in sugared veins
Taste of millenias catch your tongue-
Shattered street light on pavement dying
As fire fights young pagans for,
Life under a moon lit sky covered in silt,
Crackling ember brings waves of guilt
And lost attraction,
Sucked in by a vortex of abstraction
Under blankets of charcoal snow
Held by wilting grass and blow-ing aphids away
Into their last events,
Under Catholic preacher tents, and Capricorn denial
Of causing Cancer and crashing Taurus into the pole downtown
Made of steel, and dead lovers
From Lake Elizabeth Park



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On Friday May 13th, 2005, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
excellent.


On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
Oh my God this was just beautiful. The content was stunning and created the most amazing haunting images. Such depth to this.. ~Wish Upon A Star


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:
Smoot write... Was a mindflow of perfection, put down to words. powerfull and touching in some wierd sense. I like it alot. And it shall be red often. *favors*


On Monday March 29th, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:
you selection of words was perfect in creating the right picture, everything was so good and intense, nice write! ~finaldestiny~


On Sunday March 28th, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:
slick write ... made of steal and dead lovers ... i like it man ... cool stuff ... funguy


On Sunday March 28th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
wow... a full-on read, I had to do it twice. :) Great stuff. Fox


On Sunday March 28th, 2004, suicideseason (2145) writes:
_outstanding imagery throughout...Frost bitten on concrete shells,...Out of life, Out of time...Crackling ember brings waves of guilt...awesome...i could go on and on...brilliant writing.-tim


On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
=( Im a taurus....anyways this was very good. -Morb


On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:
Nothing against any Taurus man...


On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Oh wow. Your work is so full, lush and wise. Your choice of words in this astounds me. Excellent work, I love it. ~L



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