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Ignominy

The fidelity I once had in you
Now repelled like water on gortex

...F.
..A..
.L...
L....
.I...
..N..
...G.

To the dirt covered ground
My tears now absorbed by the ferns

[Feeding]

Off your greed

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On Monday March 13th, 2006, Thorn (440) writes:

That's very dark... I like it.

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:

this is such a cool poem, original so well worded and thoughtful

On Monday March 8th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Very nice work. "My tears now absorbed by the ferns" really got to me. ~L

On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, OLd SouL (838) writes:

I chuckled just the same at Gortex. I do like ending.. the fern the feeding. Good stuff. :::OLd

On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:

the reference to 'gortex' made me chuckle, despite the serious tone of the piece... it was minimalist, to the point, and with enough little twists of tongue and mind to make it a bit interesting...

On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

yeah there's something really interesting about it ... love it. ~Wish Upon A Star

On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, hopeless (62) writes:

wow.... this is... wow ~hopeless

On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...hmmm...don't know why, but I like this, for some odd reason... -Darun

On Wednesday December 31st, 2003, Evil (543) writes:

beautiful. thats all i can say._-=Evil=-_

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