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Domineer You

Cry my lily
Blossom in the womb
Break free
Killing yourself

I can't shake this feeling
You seem distraught,
Don't step back
The land is vanishing

The clouds dance
Just for you
See them swaying to the chorus?
Music just for you

Cry my lotus
Shed your layers
Break free
Killing yourself

I can't shake this feeling
You seem distracted,
Step forward
Take what you came for

The roots plant
Just for you
See them snake away quickly?
Running away from you

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On Thursday July 20th, 2006, GreyDividing (193) writes:

A simplistic approach that left me hanging, I think I got it though i'm not necessarily sure. Good imagery. Interesting write.

On Tuesday December 30th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:

creppy, yes. but in a good way. i dunno, maybe i'm just a weird one. either way, i enjoyed this, creppy or not.

On Thursday December 25th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:

.. hmmm seems kinda like it could be a song.. i like it, tis depressing in a .. creepy way

On Thursday December 25th, 2003, suicideseason (2102) writes:

i agree with goth.very creepy...~season

On Thursday December 25th, 2003, Tracer (140) writes:

Awww thanks, creepy, really you guys, that means a lot lol...^vTracerv^

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