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Charlotte,

Can I say good-bye?
Cutting this thread that keeps you alive
Dangling in the dusty corners of my mind
Should they fall, to be covered in twine
Lasting disposition would most certainly be forgotten
Just as quick as you came
Into my heart torn by tears of guilt
And invading thoughts full of abhorrence

Can I say good-bye?
To these feelings I hold for you
Encased in glass with martyrdom embued
A conditional fate I wish I knew
Feeling the dirt and parasitical life
Allowing your timely, cowardly departure
Away from my mending heart of rue
And leaving thoughts full of gaiety

Can I say good-bye?
Let me forget all knowledge of your face
A rose that has left all it's grace
Sprinkled on the scattered leaves I chase
Through the catacombs I travel lightly
For fear of your recurring voice
Echoing throughout my hollowed veins
And cancelling thoughts full of penance

No,
I think I'll say hello.
From the world you left behind
To live in serenity (sublime)
After you floated across the line
That bordered your innocence from fear
Tracing the steps of others once more
To bleed a burning heart of ember
And thinking thoughts no more.

-Corey




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On Monday June 7th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:
"To live in Serenity (sublime)" *dreams away*


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:
astounding words and gorgeous write, got me kinda spellbound after reading this. wow. simply wow. :)


On Tuesday December 30th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
Well...I feel like crying now. The emotion in this piece is astonding. I could feel it dripping off of each word.


On Tuesday December 23rd, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
very good!


On Tuesday December 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:
I love the way you write. Your choice of words really bring the emotion to life


On Monday December 22nd, 2003, OLd SouL (833) writes:
First I've read from you, its great...especially the first verse. Definitely looking forward to more. Welcome to DP. :::OLd


On Tuesday December 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:
I read Charlotte (ode to a lost loved one) before I read this piece. I've read most of your work.. and i really enjoy it thank you and im sorry about your loss, although we've all lost something or someone at one point.



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