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Winter

Shadows moving
in Midnight's light
Unveiling of nights to come
And days of a similar nature
Fashioned to imitate the calmly night atmosphere
Mimicking the dead silence
Thriving on the absense of distraction
Leaving the mind to wonder
Mixed in a jumbled tapestry of chaotic events
As the session is repeated over again
Like the season,
thriving on the absense of distraction

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On Sunday June 6th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:

One can try imagine a place absent of distraction, but isnt everything essentially anything a distraction in a sense and from what! What are we distracted from! This is the plague...

On Sunday June 6th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:

There is no absence of distraction...no release from that of abstraction, thought swirls ever constant, bar perhaps those few unconscious moments of mental death...

On Sunday June 6th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:

I took my time...As i knew i would but i begin in the beginning, veritably of course. Time to watch you grow as a writer, see what you learnt and learn with you...It Begins...

On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

I agree with capt.. That was also the line that twisted me most.. lovely write, and the lenght fidded me nicely.

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, capt_funguy (992) writes:

"absense of distraction" ... sounds luxurious ... dig the concept of this , and where you bring it ... funguy

On Friday January 16th, 2004, stormtalk (881) writes:

I like your style. This one seems like it would be good read/sung aloud, particularly for a pun on wander/wonder...

On Sunday January 11th, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

"Thriving on the absense of distraction Leaving the mind to wonder " and wonder I did as I read this, I love your usage of metaphors, vivid and crisp...not an easy task..Bravo! *Vel*

On Monday December 29th, 2003, TornPaperDoll (74) writes:

hmm..i've never seen winter written so warm, yet chilling and lonely at the same time.TPD

On Tuesday December 23rd, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

me like!

On Sunday December 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:

interesting

On Friday December 26th, 2003, Tracer (140) writes:

in what way?

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