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"Breaking Heart" by changed_angel

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What does it sound like when your heart is breaking?
When the walls come crashing down?
It sounds like your whole world is being demolished
The echoing of his voice in your head turns to insanity
You can't see the sunshine of happiness
For the thickening fog of sadness
You miss him so much you can taste it
You can hear him pretending he doesn't care
In the memory of what he told you
He doesn't really mean to stab a stick through your heat, Does he?
Just like all other men
He likes the sound of my cry,
The sound of the ripping,
The silence of my heart



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On Monday May 26th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (623) writes:
Oh... So good at expressing such pain... aganizing words conveying the harshness of bad love gone worse...I agree...wonderful.~DW~


On Monday May 26th, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:
damn .. this was painful to read .. i've read through several of your poems now and it's sad to think of all the pain you've gone through .. i wish there was somthing i could say to enlighten you ... wonderful write .D&A


On Thursday March 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:
I like it alot. I just lost the love of my life because that love lost theres for me. This poem got to me, please keep wrighting.


On Saturday March 1st, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
i could almost hear the sound of your pain....


On Thursday February 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:
I like it a lot... One of the rare I like this much! Good work! keep on writing, it seems so real and sincere... :)



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