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Death By Love

I took my life,
I couldn't go on
I've hurt inside,
For way too long
I've done you a favor,
By going away
For my soul ,
Please don't pray
It was my choice,
What happened that night,
Sorry you had to clean up,
My bloody knife
Don't cry for me,
It does no good
You did so much,
As much as you could
Erase my memory,
From your mind
But recognize what happens,
When love's not kind

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On Sunday June 12th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:

Amazing write. This flowed very nicely. ~Unlucky

On Friday January 30th, 2004, Bluegoddess (61) writes:

so much buety in this peice, i can almost feel your helplessness and desolation in this, much respect !blue

On Tuesday April 22nd, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

ah yes... but how hard it is for the one left behind!

On Friday March 14th, 2003, ~SHeLL*BeLL~ (71) writes:

awesome!

On Friday February 28th, 2003, Malkavai (12) writes:

Well captured emotion. I can relate to the feelings.

On Wednesday March 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

i like it, especially the "I've done you a favor, By going away" lines.

On Monday June 16th, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:

it's well crafted and sinuous.... but suicide is never a favor to anyone...

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