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"Death of Both" by changed_angel

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Stabbing death and there I'll be
Dead on the floor for you to see
You took me for granted, refusing to understand
You cut my heart and left me with a strand
You didn't think before you said
Now it's your fault that I am dead
Sure it was me, I pushed it through
But now my dead body's here to haunt you
Continue to do what you do, whalking all over everyone
But be areful when she grabbs, that trigger-happy gun
You'll end up the same, and there you'll be
Dead on the floor, just like me
You got what was coming, you got what you deserved
For your last three seconds, realization was reserved
Double suicide and homicide in one
Our lives ruined, revenge is done
Sweetness finished, plans complete
There it is surrendering defeat
Both dead neithers no more
Both lie rotting beneath the floor



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On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (203) writes:
I love how you can put such a feeling, into such a beautiful rythm. You are a wonderful writer! -Heather-


On Friday January 30th, 2004, Bluegoddess (61) writes:
yeah, i've felt like this before, if only i wouldve thought to bury them neath the floor? .. great write. ~blue


On Thursday November 6th, 2003, TheArtOfX (104) writes:
wow... this was an awsome poem. i can relate to this quite well, you are talented indeed. -Art


On Wednesday November 5th, 2003, SilentStalker (1318) writes:
...sweetly written...I knew you had to have some good stuff...your profile told me so...why didn't I find you earlier...? -Darun


On Saturday March 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:
hmm...i would dedicate something like this to my ex....i write thing with almost the same feel about them


On Thursday February 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:
wow! its deep. good job. i like it in a strange way.



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