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Spiraling thoughts producing dellusions
Eyes open seeing illusions
Actions taked hearts broken
Poems written never spoken
Figured it out conclusions drawn
Things to do before the dawn
Remaining secrets until they are done
All over before the sun
Date set plans known
Feelings hidden over-grown
Times come here we go
Painful death nice and slow
There he lies on the ground
Dripping blood no sound
Bloody knife now burried
Lost life greatness carried
No more abuse soul forsaken
For one night actions taken
Tomorrow now new day
Another life time to play
22 in hand cold metal
Procured craziness thoughts settled
Trigger pulled fast fall
Hard floor bloody wall
Plans done darkness found
Souls floating hellbound


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On Friday October 24th, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
I loved this poem, the way you wrote it kinda brings it to life right b-4 my eyes, i can visualize this! great content great write.


On Thursday June 26th, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:
This is great. I love the darkness in this is poem. Love the blood too.


On Saturday June 14th, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:
This is .. s-p-l-e-n-d-i-d:[ suspending thoughts over hears that hear them, every word nuzzles the barrel of the gun ] Shallam. Wonderfu;l write. [D&A]


On Saturday June 14th, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:
Amazing work. It had a great flow and I loved it! Funny thing is, I do remember having a dream similar to that not too long ago


On Monday June 16th, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:
very very dark... is 'taked' in the 3rd line a typo? should it be "taken"?



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