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My Scar

Not alive
Just not quite dead
Not insane
Just out of my head
Not suicidal
Just need the pain
Not lost
Just love the rain
Not an alocholic
Just love the taste
Not depressed
Life's just a waste
Not violent
Just love to fight
Not morbid
Just love the night
Not bored
Just love to write
Not rebellious
Just argue to spite
Not leaving
Just going away
Not revengeful
he's just gotta pay
Not tired
Just need the sleep
Not crying
The tears just seep
Not a lot of things
But ironically are
All of these things
Create my scar

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On Sunday October 12th, 2008, FleshyTomb (13) writes:

So intricately designed. Gorgeous write. -tomb.

On Saturday August 23rd, 2008, JADEDEDGE (7) writes:

really cool verbiage, I like you're rhyme. It explains everything nicely.

On Sunday December 23rd, 2007, The Spiral Downward (388) writes:

I really like how you balance and give a sense of realism to all this unbalanced fantasy-ish work! Awesome!

On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (460) writes:

i love how it flowed, two line rhymes that short dont sound to good usually... but that was awesome.

On Friday May 18th, 2007, An Expired Member (8) writes:

That it's so familiar and so truth but why hide what we really feel and just do what we want.....we should...good writing.

On Thursday May 18th, 2006, mywristshurt (512) writes:

damn thats awesome.. reminds me of another one i got, but not as good.. yours is like 5 times as good as mine.. and i suck at writing.. anyways, i liked it

On Saturday February 25th, 2006, weyvern (103) writes:

this is so cleaver and familliar in some ways I love it

On Friday February 3rd, 2006, An Expired Member (21) writes:

Wow... not alot of things but one things for sure this is amazing.

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, dead_inside (45) writes:

this is absolutely amazing, one of the best poems ive read

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (404) writes:

brilliant, justified, truth. such a good write;

On Tuesday November 22nd, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:

I gotta say that is a great write! 'Not alive, Just not quite dead', very powerful line for the opening. Kept me reading the whole thing! The rhyme scheme is a added plus too!

On Tuesday November 22nd, 2005, LovesInjecedVirus (10) writes:

wow very powerful Not suicidal Just need the pain Not lost Just love the rain my favorite part... its amazing

On Wednesday October 26th, 2005, Err0r (564) writes:

Excellent proof of why the rhyme scheme is still alive. Great write.

On Sunday October 23rd, 2005, Darkest_Addiction (53) writes:

so true do you know me? love it

On Sunday October 16th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:

i like it...its deep and has a good beat to it.. nice work

On Friday September 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (26) writes:

love this poem. It reminds me kind of this poem i read by dorthy parker i think its called resumee. I dont know why it reminds me of it though. oh well.

On Monday August 22nd, 2005, Nail Bunny (222) writes:

That was absolutely amazing... your words perfectly describe so many american teens... and most of them don't know it...

On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (16) writes:

u have no idea how much this poem means to me. it is wonderful and im gonna print it out and if people ask if i wrote it im gonna say "hell no! do u really think im this good?" i really do love it-ariel

On Sunday February 27th, 2005, rondant (76) writes:

wonderfully written.......Ronda

On Saturday August 7th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

Good write.... but makes me think theres to many scars to deal with in one life time. *JiNx*

On Thursday July 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (69) writes:

I like it.

On Sunday July 11th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

I dont think any of the ryming was forced...

On Thursday July 8th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:

i hate forced rhyme.

On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (203) writes:

This is wonderfully written. -Heather-

On Sunday June 27th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Simply amazing..*adds to favorite list* ..::Fairy::...

On Friday June 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (28) writes:

This was so meaningful so wonderful so everything beautiful i love it more then anything esle so far that i have read on this site which i thought was everything, i m in awe...

On Friday June 13th, 2003, manywalks (949) writes:

Ya know, I really liked this. Interesting, nearly melodic, and held a perfect flow. Thanks. ~ mw

On Friday June 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (36) writes:

Ooooh, beautiful...just all in all amazing poem, excellent job!!

On Friday June 13th, 2003, alone (199) writes:

This is astounding work my fellow poet...you are very talentad!

On Monday June 16th, 2003, boughtwithblood (294) writes:

this was very very good... "not lost, just love the rain" was my favorite

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