Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
"The Place of No Judgments" by Endifference

Dark Poetry Home

Log In

Random Poetry


White wind played over the dune today
In the river of the sun
Where dreams idle and reverberate
Twisting like spines and columns of light
Where thoughts gather thick as sand and wait
In the Place of No Judgments

Here stood seven trees near a desert
Leaves un-blown by passion and desire
Branches stable and inert, movement dissolved
You see, it’s taste and distaste makes the world revolve
Becoming the midst of it all, new to the world, and not yet spent
Like aboriginal innocence…The Place of No Judgments

Black birds that would not visit fields, nor in silence cry
And having strewn themselves across the sky
Set out as a shade over fire, to keep the sun
To keep as a child un-born, a life un-begun
Unwashed in the heat of its birth, like cold iron to flint
They were changing it, that place, the Place of No Judgments

Like sparks to ash long burned away
The fish refused to swim today,
And purpose flogged its own pride
Such that it parted, as poles must separate
Like rain falling to the sky, the concourse of life has bent
No punishments hence, should this sustain…in the Place of No Judgments

Skin takes the cool from the air
And itself becomes cold and unaware
And the blue from the sky it takes as its color
The stiffness of trees, the body gives its limbs
And the breath, as a passing wind, is kept once, then spent
Life and definition…death and memory…in the Place of No Judgments






Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.




If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Sunday June 27th, 2004, missanthropic (48) writes:
may we all know this place, somewhere in our hearts...you leave me with no need to pass my judgment upon it...


On Saturday June 12th, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:
It's hard to find words after being stunned by such magnificence, I'm saying that in all honesty. Absolutely captivating in strong twists of imagery, just, amazing.


On Saturday May 29th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
_i'm with girlie...i could have read on and on and on and on....breath taking imagery...just awesome.:)tim


On Friday May 28th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
I really wanted some more of this...it is serenely beautiful. Every stanza spoke to me on some spiritual level..thank you for having the mind that thought of this...


On Friday May 28th, 2004, stitch (78) writes:
i falter with the words to express how much i enjoyed this. this piece speaks in an ancient wisdom that somehow seems familiar while being new at the same time. a journey, that i thank you for inviting us to share with you.


On Friday May 28th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:
this is utterly sublime every single line so rich and thoughtful,currently all of your newest ones have been my fave and just keep getting better, a really well thought idea behind this, truly masterful poetry


On Friday May 28th, 2004, Recycled (161) writes:
This had the creativity of a weeks worth of posts by any other author. Very abstract. Very tasty.



Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read  Home  Copyright Policy  Bugs


Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC


© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.



Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/3928/38802 on Sunday October 12th, 2008 08:51 AM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)