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It is raining in the dark,
in the deep low-cloud cathedral
where earlier the frog-drone chant
heralded the first winds of the storm.

Leaves churned up from the ground
and scattered from their limbs with the birds
as the air spilled about itself, drunk with power.

The first skybright flashes, chased by
the concussive booms, all traveled overhead
and deep through the ground
like cannon-speak from some old war
between nameless armies,
faceless soldiers marching in the dark.



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On Saturday February 16th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (583) writes:
extreme imagery brother, an excellent rythm and a darkness that engulfs this piece perfectly -symph-


On Saturday February 9th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
also the effect of the words rhythmically is both pounding and profound enough to pause fopr the aftermath of silence...from the 'faceless soldiers marching in the dark.' A brilliant poem, you have an impressive ability for sure - well done pal...


On Saturday February 9th, 2008, NikesRain (1422) writes:
this is gorgeous in feel and image... perfectly capturing the power and beauty of the subject...


On Saturday February 9th, 2008, Mab (995) writes:
dark and foreboding...your imagery is powerful and reaches beyond written words.


On Saturday February 9th, 2008, elisa (2018) writes:
love the feel of this... a looming premonition with an ominous tone.... the hibernating heart ...beat .... dormant not dead. excellent write.



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