I all too often slip on my happy-facade. Great write, great way of capturing the need. ~*~Tart~*~

exactly....i feel you on this

total agreement....to some extent..~YeStErDaY~

i meant poem, not phone, when i said "as for the phone". typo. nobody's perfect.

as they said. simple. message seen well. message seen far to well ... u should just pick up the phone. and dial. u know the number. but as for the phone, i really like ur style. direct, and it flows.

i agree with justme.there is a quiet, simple elegance working here.and so much feeling.when you're lonely it's so hard to reach out to people. very,nice work!~season

Quiet and empathetical. I'll show you my loneliness if you show me yours and then we could be freinds:)I really like this, short and simple and says it all about so much but is so detailed to you as an individual at the same time. ~JMDW~