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Beautiful You

I
I don't know
You anymore
And
I
I can't be there
Like before
I
I have let myself
Down
To save you
Beautiful you
Too many times
Now I must let
You
Beautiful you
Drown
You
So far
Above me
Sunk now
To my level
Falling apart
I cannot gather
The fragments
Of your
Beaufitul heart
I
I am not
Your savior
Just as you
Beautiful you
Are not
Mine
Do not
Reach out
To me
My hand has been
Withdrawn
This is for
Your own good
Stop calling
Out to me
Turn around
Face
The mirror
I am as weak
As you'll never be
Is your answer truly unclear?
You
Beautiful you
You are your
Savior
So do it
Reach out
To you
Beautiful you
And
Stop calling
Out to me
I can't be your crutch
My fix is only
Temporary
Relief
Catch yourself

My arms are tired

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On Friday December 8th, 2006, Mylissa (1072) writes:

beautiful...wrenching...but beautiful.

On Friday December 8th, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (106) writes:

i love this, in fact it's something i should probably do with my best friend and et her catch herself, but i can't because i don't want to lose her..... AWESOME WRITE

On Monday June 26th, 2006, kiss of the dark (43) writes:

Gorgeous...simply unsimple in all its glory and loveliness...

On Tuesday April 11th, 2006, Morbid_insanity (114) writes:

It struck a cord. nice write

On Monday June 21st, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

my friend just said soemthign like this to me. it hurt ~ss

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Some of the most beautiful things always seem to be pretty f-ed up, eh?

On Saturday December 27th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

this is a great write as so many have said the feelings u show in this are of great power never stop writeing

On Saturday December 27th, 2003, braindeadpoet (127) writes:

Wonderful write, the flow is as unique as your thinking. Good job---jer

On Saturday December 27th, 2003, Choronzon (233) writes:

beautiful

On Saturday December 27th, 2003, suicideseason (2141) writes:

damn...i'll be back when i have real comments.~season

On Saturday December 27th, 2003, suicideseason (2141) writes:

so much energy.it's like you know what you have to do and you don't want to do it...yet you must.it's hard to let go.wonderful thought provoking work!~season

On Saturday December 27th, 2003, suicideseason (2141) writes:

and the guilt...this poem is saturated with it.i really like this one.~season

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