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Standing on feet that were bleeding
By a cold and crashing sea
Catching a sound in the distance
Like a child gently calling to me

I limped for a ways before seeing
The brokenness under my toes
Pieces of something once different
Fragments of something once whole

I was raining and crying in pieces
I was lost and alone on the floor
I was scattered and tattered and beaten
On the edge of a broken-shelled shore

I fell to my knees without feeling
The points as they punctured my skin
Cradling a shell that was shattered
And crying as I saw her within

She was tiny and silently hiding
In a corner of a very dark room
Child of a father turned rapist
In the shadow of childhood consumed

I was crying and dying in pieces
I was shattered and torn on the floor
I was scattered and tattered and beaten
On the edge of a broken-shelled shore

I gathered the brokenness to me
While my tears washed away all the dirt
Each little shred was a piece of the past
And I held in my heart the hell and the hurt

My fingers imparted to each forlorn bit
The pain and the love that I felt
And there on the beach a new growth began
As among all the pieces I knelt

I'd been shattered and scattered in pieces
I'd been left all alone on the floor
My teardrops were raining forever
On the edge of a broken-shelled shore

I was standing on feet that were stronger
By a wild and beautiful sea
And the song that I heard in the distance
Was the sound of my Soul finding Me.




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On Friday July 2nd, 2004, Demosthenes (222) writes:
i havent read anything in a while. starting back up, thinking what better? you, and nothing else. you frighten me, thats how hard it hits, just the right way, flashing. -B


On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
I liked the way you always seem to hold onto hope, even if by a thread in your writings. Maybe not so much hope but strength to overcome.


On Thursday February 26th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
Trials and tribulations, then growing stronger. I love this, it shows growing in time with strength.


On Monday April 21st, 2003, Jonas (874) writes:
this gave me the tinglies in my neck that i get when i read words that touch me...i can't even begin to tell you with any adequate words how excellent your work is and how much it means to me.


On Monday April 21st, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
crashing into life.... inspiration at it's finest.


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, Bast (896) writes:
Good for you, puddin pop! ;)


On Monday April 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:
You are ingenious....Perfectly written!!


On Monday April 14th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Superb Peice Of Work Here Cre... Every Time I Read Something Of Yours I am All The Better For It, And For That I Thank You.


On Monday April 14th, 2003, braindead_poet (581) writes:
vastly amazing; i cant really bring any other words to mind at the moment, except maybe that you ARE the ultimate shiznit


On Sunday April 13th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
this is very powerful. the emotions are all expressed clearly, and the imagery is as if I were watching it on a high definition TV. beautiful. :)


On Sunday April 13th, 2003, shadowsinthelight (210) writes:
Another good song, Keep writing, S.


On Sunday April 13th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
Incredible. Powerful ending.


On Saturday April 12th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:
beautifully written.... the ending is just... so ...wow. i can think of no other word to explain how this made me feel. Phenomenal piece


On Saturday April 12th, 2003, Six-Out (1827) writes:
Jane, you are one of the best writers I have ever had the pleasure of reading. If you ever stop, I will hunt you down, take your brain, and connect it to a writing machine of some sort, you get the picture. Keep it up.


On Saturday April 12th, 2003, cre (508) writes:
Hmmm, I might like the prospect of you hunting me down :P


On Saturday April 12th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
Oh Georgeous! I love it! wonderful Jane, just wonderful


On Saturday April 12th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:
I love it. The transformation and the ending.. I love it.



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