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I thought the sky only came in that color
When the greatest of tragedies weaved
Into the tapestry of life
And left her soul bereaved

When the winter of some deadly end
Snowed its cremation down
And ashes painted dead trees white
And gathered in silent piles on a muted ground

Times we all watched the redness of the sun
As it bled away into the sky
And its washing paleness seemed to speak of things
Oddities that crept and leaked into our minds

In the stillness of moments halted
Leaving space for only a breeze to chill your skin
The frozen fear that claimed your eyes
Urging us all to seek the sky again

For some message hidden in bleakly withered mist
A cloudy dawning upon our minds we prayed
Fumbling numbness against a blank backdrop
Some bodies left and some in grey death stayed

Every sky in my mind fades to that distant color
And winds like angels laden with tales of grief
Whisper my world into that past existence
As though I were no more than autumn's forgotten leaf.



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On Thursday April 8th, 2004, steuss (145) writes:
The last stanza is just beautifully written. This made me think, and then fill with a melancholic joy.


On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
Speaking of weaving, you weave the most beautiful of stories so seemingly effortlessly.


On Friday May 23rd, 2003, Twilight (2102) writes:
i love this. i an call this amazing...no justice would be called...this is reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally amazing.


On Saturday May 3rd, 2003, Sharon Rose (637) writes:
Awesome...look what happens when I forget to read your page for a couple weeks. Please, keep writing, it only gets better and the words stronger and imagery more breathtaking.


On Monday April 21st, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
awe. So quiet and so strong.


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, Bast (896) writes:
Intensely beautiful...


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
just for the hell of it .... like many other pieces of yours .... i think i'll just add another comment to make it look that much bigger and better .... kinda like ... inflation


On Saturday April 12th, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:
What can I say? Everyone has already said what this one is, beautiful.


On Friday April 11th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
you have done it once again! its a wonderful piece, very powerful. "ashes painted dead trees white" that verse hit me. As always i LOVE it! trully great! :)


On Friday April 11th, 2003, sad_&_reminded (23) writes:
And winds like angels laden with tales of grief Whisper my world into that past existence As though I were no more than autumn's forgotten leaf...... i really like that stanza its very good.. and Cre i love your work--- Thanks for yoru comments on min


On Friday April 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:
at first glance, too structured for my taste... but i read on, and the imagery pulled me in. thank you, especially for the last stanza which lingers in my mind


On Friday April 11th, 2003, braindead_poet (581) writes:
oh, wow man; that was immense. An incredible piece, I humbly applaud you.


On Friday April 11th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
oh, wow. this one made my eyes well up. i cant explain the emotions and memories this brought up in me. amazing. :)


On Thursday April 10th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (689) writes:
Great piece! Especially love the picture you create with the lines "When the winter of some deadly end Snowed its cremation down And ashes painted dead trees white". Very creative way to express that scene! Ciao, T/S


On Thursday April 10th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Well Cre, What Can I Say... You Have Talent, Plenty Of Talent. And In More Ways Than One! Great Peice Of Work.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
Seasonal change is always a staple in writing. Your descriptors gave the rest of the words a nice abstract feel to it.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:
absolutely beautiful in its icy blue green melancholy...


On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
ummm.......can't think of anything to say but Beautiful. gimmie more.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:
very nice! puts me in some deep thoughts


On Sunday June 29th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
enjoyed this very much cre, well done



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