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"Funeral: The Quiet Of Real" by cre

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For once I leave my mask
At home, on its shelf of my necessity
My eyes are somber, though no tears fall
As I quietly ponder the harrowing brevity

Of life,
And the days that you could not keep
Now just a reason for mourning,
And a call for us to weep

I am struck, as I always seem to be
By the pervading stillness of mood
As if the parlor which cradles your body
And the building itself are somehow subdued

In the quiet of one last moment
I brush my lips to your face
I am caught in the breathtaking silence
That even the organ dares not efface

In the background, like the children of shadows
I can see the grief-veiled wraiths
Your mother's tears with trailing stains
Etching your epitaph upon her face

For an instant, I meet her eyes
And the touch of our souls is a thing I can feel
Perhaps it's because, just for today
We've abandoned our roles and choose to be real

Trailing down the carpet-hushed hallway
And I consider that it's fitting
This absolute weight of sedate solemnity
To honor this life which was no less than flitting

Pondering, I know, and my heart agrees:
I am thankful my mask stayed behind
We must indulge, in the quietness of real
For something so forever as a final goodbye.




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On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
Man you really got me with the 6th stanza. Until then I was wondering where you were going with the analogy of leaving your mask behind.


On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
You always seem to capture the essence of a moment so perfectly. This was no different, the analogy was not only fitting but so perfectly true.


On Saturday April 5th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
you are a remarkable poet. I don't know if I've ever told you that. You are really really good. I love this poem, even though it kinda brings up my recent sorrow from my late friends. :)


On Thursday May 8th, 2003, Aurora_Light (573) writes:
wow is all i'll able to say this is very moveing


On Thursday April 3rd, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:
two, in stone church at twilight, vaulted ceiling is about how empty you feel... fingers were intertwined and slowly they slip apart. standing alone on either side of the aisle, facing a stone altar... vows broken with hearts you walk away


On Wednesday April 2nd, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (421) writes:
jane you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful words you use them so well, your work always captivates me, and makes me feel as if im there


On Wednesday April 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (21) writes:
this is beautiful... i only have one word... wow.


On Wednesday April 2nd, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
I like teh piece, its wonderful! reading you its always a pleasure! it kinda makes me think that funerals are not that bad! :)


On Wednesday April 2nd, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
Cre, you really brought me to tears with this one. I can't say enough about the things I'm feeling right now. You are a master of emotion.


On Wednesday April 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (35) writes:
Wonderful, it feels like a funeral. I love the title, as well.



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