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I had been staring for awhile
when I realized the black absorbing my eyes
Wasn't really black after all
And possibly (I thought) more than that was lies

Odd, the leaf to my left (green?)
"alone on the end of a lonely limb"
Compared to what - the black I guess
Colorings based on some paintbrushed whim

Trailing of digits through time and space
Then again, not - as the fingers themselves make that so
And "through a moment" - no - through many
Though it seems like one - what the mind doesn't know

Redirecting misdirected (hijacked) attention
(with care) - knowledge of an obsequious bent
To this tricky attractor (vanity's enabler)
An addictive (though not always vindictive) intent

Randomly resting appendage (palm down)
Magnetic (it seems) to yesterday's crumbled shells
False convictions breeding fuck-you evictions
When even heaven might be someone's hell

Surveying, (glance straying) , for no good reason
Supposing, I guess, that I am seeing
But without knowing the author
I wonder if I can truly glean the meaning

What a leap, assuming - assumptions (great)
Though random settles with a satisfactory "click"
Perusing the plausible - annoyingly unnecessary
Yet answering the need to see how things "tick"

I had been staring for awhile
when I realized the scene (in its twisted disguise)
Wasn't much more (or less) than truth or tale
And the black was just my (sleeping) eyes.




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On Wednesday January 16th, 2008, Circe Avalon (184) writes:
It was twisting and laps onto it's self. like a spiral staircase, I liked it, I always like great architecture.


On Sunday October 26th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:
yknow. in addition to the dave groupie t-shirts, i think i may have to make cre groupie t-shirts now. -B


On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, Twilight (2104) writes:
wiow...i loved the way this lfowed from beginning till end. verrrry well done.


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Twilight (2104) writes:
ive been reading over works i have read before lately. and i think now that i have read it again i see more in it. the last verse was pretty sweet, i read it over and over. well done cre.


On Sunday April 6th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
nicely done. :)


On Sunday March 30th, 2003, Six-Out (1822) writes:
Blah. I hate you. Why must you be so damn good. Grr. lol. Later Jane.


On Saturday April 5th, 2003, Armand (73) writes:
if i didnt know better, i would have thought you stole this gem from a buried chest of dylan thomas' unpublished works. wow... you took such a mundane event and painted a masterpiece. excellent use of parentheses.


On Thursday March 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (35) writes:
Reminds me of the thought that maybe those thought to be insane are the only sane ones.


On Wednesday March 26th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (421) writes:
youre an amazing poet


On Wednesday March 26th, 2003, Jonas (862) writes:
this comment will not much be deep... this poem reminds me of really excellent weed.


On Wednesday March 26th, 2003, manywalks (952) writes:
I found the third stanza to be exceptional; superb work, thanks.



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