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When spinning with this mad translation
Elixir of some type: elation
Briefly wondering at the notion
I see not strings yet feel their motion

Dare I think I hear the turning
Crisply leafing, fingers burning
Dreamer keep that pagination!
Fill my world with agitation

In my sky, what odd libration
Taunts my eye with deaf dictation
Amazing thought! it renders me
Dancing wildly - pageantry

Delight synapses scramble -ing
Reality goes ramble -ing
Twisted in opposed dimensions
Seeing both - what comprehension!

Moment halting, time resists
I feel not strings yet they exist
Dreamer's halted pagination
Lets leak amazing realization!

Applauding this crazed adaptation
Living life in your quotations
Felt not, saw not - "acquiescence"
Divine! Sublime! my world, in essence

When spinning with this mad translation
Elixir mine, what aberration
I submit - sweet subjugation
Dreamer keep that pagination!




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On Sunday May 4th, 2008, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:
This was as well crafted as it was dark! Very insightful!


On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, GirlintheBox (50) writes:
ive only been a member for one day, but ive managed to read most of your poems. you are incredibly gifted! you are the reason ive searched the web so long and hard to find good poetry...keep it up, and offer me constructive critisism anytime!


On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (195) writes:
Reading this had me lost in another realm of poetry, this was a great poem, thank you for sharing it, it is definatly one of my favorite poems ever, it left me stunned ~Emptyness~


On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (316) writes:
Once again... Bravo!


On Sunday April 27th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
I am inclined to agree with the others...the rhyme is phenominal and the word choice is well thought out.


On Monday April 7th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
I too really enjoyed this one. Like they said, flawless rhyme with adept flow.


On Thursday March 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (35) writes:
Rhyming insanity. Wonderfully done. You've gotta be one of my favorite poets.


On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, Six-Out (1831) writes:
Jane! That was great. Why must you keep getting better? I'm going to have to hide my face in shame if anyone compares our work. Good job.


On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, Ravenblade (281) writes:
This has such an awesome rhyme scheme, and great wording. Plus as always it flows extremely well and it has a rhythm that is easy to find. I really wish I had your level of skill when it comes to writing


On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, Jonas (885) writes:
craziness... i really like where you've been going with your work lately.



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