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Church You Say? by cre
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Church You Say?

~ cre ~

~here's the church here's the steeple this is how we fuck the people~

Sunday mornings
Dress up nice
For God's sake, kids
Please act right

Mommy teaches
Sunday school
Spouting verses
Like a fool

Oh so nice
To other kids
I won't tell them
What you did

Last tuesday when
You screamed so loud
And kicked my brother
To the ground

Or friday when
You got so drunk
And gave me pills
And other junk

Or maybe they
Would like to see
The pictures that
You take of me

But Mommy teaches
Sunday school
She must be nice
And neat and cool

Now Daddy, he's
A deacon, see
And goes to church
So faithfully

Oh so nice,
And gentle too
I won't tell them
What you do

When mommy is
Too drunk to "play"
You get your jollies
Other ways

Like thursday when
You were so pissed
And smashed my brother
With your fist

Or maybe they
Would like to see
Just what you did
With sis and me

You said: "I'll get
Them tucked in bed"
But you had come
To fuck instead

The list goes on
It's sad but true
You even gave
The dog a screw

But Daddy, he's
A deacon, see
He must be good
And kind and sweet

Sunday mornings,
Dress up nice
For Christ's sake, God
"Act" is right.

~burn the church and use the steeple, to hang those fucking stupid people~

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  • Rowan On Friday, February 19, 2010, Rowan (126) wrote:

    I love this!

  • Wiccad On Wednesday, January 6, 2010, Wiccad (76) wrote:

    Love This To Death. Nice rhyme, great stuff.

  • YourLuna On Tuesday, May 5, 2009, YourLuna (32) wrote:

    omg. i love you and this poem.

  • Morbid_insanity On Monday, December 22, 2008, Morbid_insanity (129) wrote:

    hmm its sad that there are many people in the church that act that way but at the same time do they currupt the religion or is it just them themselves who are currupt.

  • colorapathy On Tuesday, April 8, 2008, colorapathy (59) wrote:

    perfect... my thoughts exactly.. with a good flow to boot.

  • Miss Dahlia On Thursday, January 3, 2008, Miss Dahlia (210) wrote:

    awwh i like it!

  • Wolfaerie On Sunday, November 25, 2007, Wolfaerie (100) wrote:

    I LOVE THIS! This is brilliant on so many levels. I grew up on curropt church rhetoric as well... Glad we're not all sheep

  • A former member wrote: I think we are of the same religion.

  • Circe Avalon On Saturday, November 10, 2007, Circe Avalon (150) wrote:

    this is good shit, I feel right there with you on that....

  • Niemand On Saturday, November 3, 2007, Niemand (557) wrote:

    OH MY FUCKING GOD!! So fucking AMAZING!!! I LOVE THIS!!-Airi

  • zanewill On Thursday, February 15, 2007, zanewill (101) wrote:

    i keep coming back 2 this becuz the truth of it is hilarious!! excellent >>>>>>

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Friday, February 9, 2007, Spiritus_Frumenti (366) wrote:

    this was like a marilyn manson song. excellent write, though. this should be given out in school lit classes. -l-

  • zanewill On Sunday, January 28, 2007, zanewill (101) wrote:

    WRITE-FUCKING-ON!!!

  • A former member wrote: best poem ever

  • JiNx On Sunday, November 26, 2006, JiNx (134) wrote:

    Amazing poem... I love the flow of it.. and it sucks how true it can be... -JiNx(ie)

  • HalfDarkAngel On Thursday, October 12, 2006, HalfDarkAngel (79) wrote:

    wow fucking amazing.

  • A former member wrote: haha, I think you are lving in the wrong century, humanity doesn't allow hanging humans in a church. But I agree with burning the churches.

  • A former member wrote: Damn!! This is cool. I used to be a church-goer, up until the pastor sold the church... tell me thats not fucked up. So true, so true. Then I learned so much of it was fake. I agree with you. Burn it all, baby!

  • dp_whipping_girl On Friday, June 9, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (333) wrote:

    truth hurts doesn't it; couple of people i'd like to send about 3000 copies of this to ... awesome write, my respect to you for telling it true, ~pf

  • Nail Bunny On Wednesday, June 7, 2006, Nail Bunny (187) wrote:

    I read this again with my faith failing me, and now I must stand and applaud you. BURN THE DAMN THING DOWN!!!! And let's hang 'em all.


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