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O' Child, when he would come for thee
Thine angels they would cry
In angst, I guess, and nothing less
Three screams would rend the night

Although at first it seems absurd
To see a child so wee
Surrounded thus, we must discuss
The way they came to be

'Twas just one night with little light
While winds did smash around
Such sorrow on that eve and morrow
Soul's own death toll did sound

Her mighty heart did rip apart
And anguished Sky did tear
Despair in pain did shriek his name
At thy softly whispered prayer

Though pain and death do steal my breath
Let me not be wrought asunder
Oh Angels weep o'er slaughtered sheep
And break the spell they're under

And darkened Night did hide thy plight
Not from celestial eyes
Upon thy plea they answered thee
And gathered surely nigh

Courage gifted, thy spirits lifted
Though pain did still stalk thee
Forever hence at thy defense
Angelic warriors, three

Though sadly he, still came for thee
Thine angels kept thee sane
'Till pain and death that stole thy breath
Had finally passed away.



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On Monday February 4th, 2008, Circe Avalon (183) writes:
So very good, prithee, what inspired thee to write so?


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (770) writes:
you are such an amazing writer, and so inspirational too. Awesome write ~*~Tart~*~


On Wednesday February 23rd, 2005, GothicBlack (269) writes:
ok so i just looked and i've already left a comment from the past. but meh, again it just proves how much i love this poem. LOL ~gothic


On Wednesday February 23rd, 2005, GothicBlack (269) writes:
all i have to say is that i am left in shock. Shock because i have not read this before, shocked because of its exquisite beauty, shocked because i am shocked. As i'm sure your well a where, i have a "thing" for Angels and this is THE best angel poem i th


On Wednesday February 23rd, 2005, GothicBlack (269) writes:
think i have ever read from DP. Cre you have completely out done yourself at this one. I have always loved your work but this particular poem has put a new prespictive of you, and your talent. Bravo, pat yourself on the back.... wow. ~gothic~


On Tuesday December 30th, 2003, Choronzon (236) writes:
Quite awesome.


On Friday October 17th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
Ahh...this was beautiful Cre. The old language...it just...you seemed to have mastered it. Is there anything you can't write?


On Wednesday August 27th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
Very sweet write by a very sweet person! +Fallen Angel+


On Friday July 4th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (586) writes:
The first time was silent, the second outloud, the third...in a whisper...the fourth in amazement...though I'm not sure why. Your soul shouts it's feeling and meaning with every word...every poem.


On Friday July 4th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (586) writes:
I am for a first...lost for words. So poignant, so meant and so much more is this work...that I can't dissect my own feelings for it enough to tell you about them. Thankyou for sharing this one with us. ~DW~


On Monday June 9th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
Bravo!! I am constantly at a loss for words after visiting your profile. Each new poem is like a present to me!!! haha Great work!!


On Thursday June 5th, 2003, Sadistic_Plague (11) writes:
WOW! i really really love this one


On Monday April 7th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
immaculate. :)


On Friday March 28th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
So far this is my favorite. I just love the way it flows. Awesome job, can't wait to read more.


On Saturday March 29th, 2003, GothicBlack (269) writes:
WOW!!!! k, well I’m a sucker for the olden day language and well... you pulled it off beautifully! Never have I found someone that can write in that language as great as you!!!! BRAVO, you deserve a metal for this one. I cant get over this. wow! ~gothic~


On Saturday March 29th, 2003, cre (508) writes:
tyvm for your comments :) This poem I tried at first to write in normal language but it simply refused to be anyway but the way it is. I was nervous to post it as it was my first foray into this way of speaking. You were one of the very first poets I ev


On Saturday March 29th, 2003, cre (508) writes:
I ever read at this site, and I greatly respect your work -- so your comments are truly appreciated. :) Thanks!


On Thursday March 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (35) writes:
Beautiful. Deeply spiritual. Love it.


On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, Ravenblade (275) writes:
DAMN!!!That was an awesome poem, I could see that one being put in Cre's best Poems, way down the road, its so much like a poem of the older styles, like Poe, or Crowlwy. I love the wording on it, and just everything.


On Thursday October 23rd, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:
see that first word in that comment right above this comment? thats my comment. and it is very. -B


On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
just great Jane! This is one more great piece! keep writing! :)


On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
magnificent. I would have had a very difficult time writing in this style... you did it so beautifully....so effortlessly. :)


On Tuesday March 18th, 2003, Jonas (859) writes:
i read this, first, like beat poetry; i let the words just roll off of my tongue and ignored the meaning... it was beautiful... i read again and it became moreso... i like the changes in your styles.


On Sunday March 16th, 2003, Six-Out (1819) writes:
Damn you, always trying to upstage me! I admit it was good, but that doesn't change the fact that you're a loser. :[ BATS!!!


On Sunday March 16th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
great read...just screams ur talent away!


On Sunday March 16th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (420) writes:
wow this is very good, i enjoy it more more :)



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