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Chaos

The situation's normal
The people are just fine
The chaos is inside me
It's fucking up my mind

Spinning out of touch
Forget reality
They say the world makes sense
The insanity's in me

The walls are shifting in and out
And I wonder what you mean
And I even have to question
If what is real is what I've seen

But then I keep on spinning
And I know that I am right
Fuck you all I've got it down
With amazing clarity of sight

The situation's normal
The people are just fine
And I really don't give a shit
If they think I've lost my mind

Cause now my world is spinning
And now my world is flying
And I just dance ecstatically
Even though you say I'm dying

I try to keep on dancing
Tired but can't stop spinning
But finally it spits me out
And leaves me lost at the beginning

The situation's normal
The people were just fine
Withering to the ground
I hear you say I lost my mind

Now I'm just too tired
And I wonder what you mean
And I wonder where I was
And I wonder what you've seen

You say that I was spinning
But exhausted I just cry
And I wonder why I'm stupid
And I wish that I could die

The situation's normal
The people were just fine
But that was just the day before
I finally lost my mind

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On Wednesday November 21st, 2007, The Spiral Downward (401) writes:

This would make an excellent song! The Flow and Rhyme is so well used! It's Stunning! Plus One Never Really Sees The Last Stanza Coming! Great!

On Wednesday April 25th, 2007, An Expired Member (3) writes:

this is ABSOLUTELY amazing!!

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

**such a complicated feeling but sometimes that's only thing that makes you feel better, right? Awesome as always! ~Faerie~

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

I'm surprised I haven't commented on this before...I thought that by now I had gone through your whole profile and said something about each piece of yours. At any rate, you rock...I like the simplified format and diction...it's hard to simplify such a c

On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

wow, all of your poetry is really moving, and very emotional, keep it up

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (14) writes:

I'd like to show this poem to everyone who's ever called me insane; I can't explain it nearly as well as you did.

On Saturday January 3rd, 2004, CharlottesWeb (592) writes:

Rarely, but ineptly every once in a while, I happen upon a poem that creates too much thought and too much feeling to exclaim about in this little box. All I can really say is, my god...you explained it all so well. It all came out so wonderfully and made

On Saturday January 3rd, 2004, CharlottesWeb (592) writes:

since and I can't beleive you did it. Every poem I've ever written has been an attempt to hint at one aspect or another of what you've done here. I'm just in awe. Wow. How'd I miss this for so long? ~shakes head~ wow. ~JMDW~

On Monday April 7th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

you think as i do... thats probably why i have loved every one of your works so far. :)

On Thursday March 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (35) writes:

Do I really need to say what I think of your stuff by now? :P Great work.

On Friday March 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

I like it...it flows really well.

On Thursday March 20th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (421) writes:

i love it all of it , it is mine i tell you, mine **hugs poem**

On Saturday March 15th, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (164) writes:

great one, I especially like the ending

On Friday March 14th, 2003, Sinnocence (53) writes:

wow. friggin brilliant. *sigh* i love it *

On Friday March 14th, 2003, Godot (14) writes:

"If what is real is what I've seen" that's an effin' brilliant line. i've looked over some of your other work and i'm rather impressed. well done. kudos to you. yourfredastaire@yahoo.com

On Friday March 14th, 2003, Jonas (865) writes:

cre, i think it's great that you corrected his spelling. you show that fuck. ;-) hehe... oh, yea, the poem. gee. no, really, good work... i'm listening to nin talk about 'myself keeps slipping away' this poem is like dat