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nobody knows

torture perfectly planned
up on your toes as long as you can
pain cuts deep
when muscles sleep
tippy tippy toes
nobody knows, nobody knows

punishment thought out well
we know how to fashion hell
tongue in two
if tell, you do
terror terror fear
nobody hears, nobody hears

games no fun to play
we've a special one for you today
eyes so wide
run and hide
haha chained you be
nobody sees, nobody sees

torture games and punishment
to us from god you were sent
love you not
fuck you lots
it's the way the story goes
nobody knows, nobody knows

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On Thursday August 12th, 2004, urbanhumility (1374) writes:

the despondancy is truly felt here...........well done super cre..........urban

On Thursday August 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

I like your work very much. It is very reflective.

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (23) writes:

:/ very nice...unfortunate that we have to keep our secrets so well hidden andsneak around just to hurt ourselves....

On Saturday January 3rd, 2004, CharlottesWeb (621) writes:

Eeek...this is so frenzied. Not confused but quick and jerky like some one who's in shock. You tell just enough to let my imagination do the rest on its own. This scares me, wonderfully written, but it scares me. ~JMDW~

On Saturday December 6th, 2003, unusual_blood (94) writes:

I cried as i read this. fucking FUCKING amzingly good, the message screams out, amazing job

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:

this was awesome, kinda reminds me of a horror movie twisted with insanity, great write! ~Emptyness~

On Monday October 20th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:

mwahahaha tis scary i love it, i like the love you not fuck you lots lines.. -chelsy

On Tuesday April 8th, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

i think i'll just add one to this arsenal of comments ... why?, why not

On Monday April 7th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

i love poems that remind me of pure insanity. :)

On Wednesday April 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

that was a cool ending... love you not, fuck you lots. i gotta write that one down lol.

On Monday March 31st, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

YOu never cease to amaze me...I know I can always count on you for a good read. =)

On Friday March 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

I love this...it unfortuanatly reminds me two of my friends...(bad relationship) but GREAT work... XDglass~~K

On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

dirty, maddening, a ballerina gets raped after recital.

On Friday March 14th, 2003, Six-Out (1798) writes:

BANG!! Me like. Good job miss apathy.

On Thursday March 13th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

your works just get better and better, this one is soo good! keep on writing! :)

On Thursday March 13th, 2003, Ravenblade (273) writes:

Awesome new work, and like I always notice with your work, it has an awesome rhythm...I still wish I had that kind of talent, teach me oh wise one

On Thursday March 13th, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:

very very mad good.. i like the part about 'love you not/ fuck you lots' that unfortunately hits me hard.. great job tho! <3Dommi

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