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She sees the world through lenses colored
A shade that's sadly blue
And when she eyes her own reflection
The thought's not "Me", but "who?"

Confusion swirls amidst the mist
That drifts off of the lake
The water seeps around her toes
While she wonders when she'll wake

She sees the child with fingertips
A cold and frosty blue
Her dark hair blowing gently
And the tear that's frozen too

Her whisper is a tiny cloud
On the air that's crackling cold
She peers from endless baby eyes
With a glance that's much too old

Their eyes are locked, and through the haze
In this illusory dream
All appears much more surreal
Than ever it has seemed

In moments merely breaths away
This fog will lift and clear
She'll find herself somewhere removed
And the blue child nowhere near

And she will wonder
As she has so oft before
What to make of this not-quite-dream
That leaves her lost and more

And still, she sees the world
Through her lenses which are blue
And someday she will learn
That her eyes are the blue child's too.



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On Monday May 15th, 2006, Saint Sentient (19) writes:
I have still yet to see this style done as expertly as this is. Wonderful.


On Monday February 6th, 2006, Lucklost (40) writes:
i love the imagery i get from this..i love it


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, fushigi no kaosu (88) writes:
that is beautiful. absoultely beautiful. i love your work.


On Saturday January 8th, 2005, stormtalk (909) writes:
Quite colorful... frosty, even. Either my heat hasn't started working yet, or this poem left me chilled...


On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
"And when she eyes her own reflection The thought's not "Me", but "who?"" I know all too well the feeling.


On Monday March 8th, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
I love it. A true work of art.


On Sunday February 29th, 2004, PaperPromises (77) writes:
breath taking.. and i love it.. i don't know much else to say.. speechless.. -CW


On Sunday November 23rd, 2003, sole (114) writes:
I saw blue the whole time I read this poem. The imagery is just amazing and as always it's written perfectly


On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, braindead_poet (581) writes:
i dont feel like kissing any ass today, or saying what i mean, either; soo... you suck. j/k ;) really this was beautiful, and you already know your talent knows no bounds, so we won't pursue that avenue... again, beautiful


On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
I am stunned, this poem left me wanting more so now I must go off and read more of your work, excellent job, ~Emptyness~


On Saturday April 12th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
This poem gave me chills. Excellent.


On Friday April 11th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
Another brilliant picture you painted. As always. :)


On Thursday March 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:
Damn...thats good


On Thursday March 20th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:
jesus i dont know what to think , bravo


On Thursday March 20th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
You are a poet...this piece is very well crafted. It flows so perfectly. Great job!


On Tuesday March 11th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:
searching searching searching, always searching... a beautifully flowing poem, with excellent cold imagery. jane is your name huh? if you were addicted to anything... hmmm... i'm not gonna finish that. great work!


On Tuesday March 11th, 2003, Ravenblade (274) writes:
I love the imagery used, plus a rather consistant use of a rhyme scheme, throughout the poem you refer to the cold, and associate blue with cold. Maybe I'm just partial because there's something about cold weather, and my favorite color is blue, in any c


On Tuesday March 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (35) writes:
My turn to be redundant, awesome work....


On Monday March 10th, 2003, DarkPoet (226) writes:
A well told story and the final stanza twist, my favorite so far.


On Monday March 10th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
shot, I need some sleep, this is too good and deep to be read as an appetizer! You are a wonderful writer, sure thing! :)


On Monday March 10th, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:
Jane, you write shit so deep, I just think damn. I think it because I'm left speechless, so I can't speak it. You have true talent. Keep it up. Later.


On Monday December 22nd, 2003, locke (28) writes:
She sees the world through lenses colored A shade that's sadly blue And when she eyes her own reflection The thought's not "Me", but "who?" this i thought was beautiful, and it reminded me of a story that i once wrote. your poems always seem to


On Monday December 22nd, 2003, locke (28) writes:
...tell a story, complete with images, though none are really needed.



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