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I would have felt sorry for you
And the child that you used to be
I know that somewhere inside, it still hurts
And believe me, I would have seen.

I would have hugged you tight
And wiped away your so-sad tears
I could have been an angel in your darkness
For all those lonely years.

I would have let my little hand
Rest with comfort in your big, rough paw
I could have helped to chase away
The demons that I'm sure you saw.

I could have let my trusting eyes
Rest on you with most sincere care
I would never have let you be alone
As long as I was there.

I could have been the tiniest light
To shine upon your way
And if ever you needed company
I would have been glad to stay.

I could have been so many things
But instead you chose the worst
You would have had a blessing in me
If you hadn't killed me first.



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On Thursday March 3rd, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:
wow..this is just breathtaking..i love it..just WOW


On Friday January 28th, 2005, sIo (845) writes:
so sad and sweet, as if from the purest of souls.


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
WOW, how amazing and heart-wrenching at the same time, i wish i had one-fourth the talent you have cre, you are an amazing poet, great job again as always ~Emptyness~


On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, BoldSolitude (275) writes:
moving, I get inspired just by reading your works.


On Sunday November 23rd, 2003, sole (114) writes:
That last line dropped my jaw, nice write.


On Friday September 5th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
Ooohhhh...I liked how it went from very sweet and innocent to so very twisted by the last line. This man, I can kill him yes?


On Sunday July 13th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:
i agree with minx...very tragic. good job...:)


On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, anathema (62) writes:
what an amazing work... the wistful tragedy of it is compelling.


On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, Amanda Parnell (72) writes:
That was so beautiful Cre. Simply beautiful. Plus, it was written on my birthday! *kitten*


On Friday April 11th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
wow. i love how diverse your topics are when you craft your wonderful works. I'd love to know the mind that can create such wizardy. :)


On Saturday April 5th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
Yes! This is surely some of your best work.


On Wednesday March 12th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
guess i can relate totally...


On Thursday March 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (35) writes:
Wow, that last line really twists the knife, great on the whole!


On Thursday March 6th, 2003, shadowsinthelight (208) writes:
Good last line, keep writing, S.


On Wednesday March 5th, 2003, DarkPoet (225) writes:
Fear not canis familiaris, unless he be not so familiar


On Wednesday March 5th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
typical... jackasses!!!! HEY!!! fish said by the by *laugh*


On Wednesday March 5th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
wow... the last line is a heart-breaker. good work dearie. the new pict, it's a good one by the by ;-)



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