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she thinks she dreams in color now
and she wonders when it rains
where the smoke gets away to
on burnt out autumn days
cold-weather coats
and someone else's chill
she never could get warm
-she never will-
vacation destinations
she can't forget the trees
she thinks she always screams

- - -
rocks come here to turn this amazing shade
dull grey to deep space
blue
you are here to change
she thinks she always knew
- - -

we should take the high road
before this day disappears
we could find our own way
before we disappear
cause the sun won't set till everything is right
she pretends she doesn't know
it's just a slipshod way of holding off the night

and she thinks dirt paths
will always lead to somewhere
but the world is grinding by
and they've all closed their eyes
they never see the snake that hisses
at their mission-minded feet

and she thinks she dreams



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On Monday June 16th, 2008, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:
wow...loaded ith millions of comments and justifibly so...a great rhythm occupies the space, albeit reflective and melancholic; beautiful details and a 'song' like coolness to the descriptions....I loved it along with the others that came here...add me to the list of admirers...damn straight!


On Monday June 16th, 2008, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
"damn straight!"..Colin, I knew you were a Yank :P


On Monday June 16th, 2008, Nuri (199) writes:
I wasn't even a member yet when you left this place but have always been a faithful reader and a huge admirer. Like Jonas said, you are missed and because of the beauty in your works, someone is always thinking about you somewhere.


On Saturday May 31st, 2008, Jonas (885) writes:
are you around anymore. i have the odd feeling of palpably missing someone i never met. shucks life is weird. i hope you are well and someday read this. i further hope that it strikes you as wonderful that another person somewhere somehow thinks good things about you from time to time.


On Friday January 4th, 2008, An Expired Member (1) writes:
Damn man that is some deep stuff there good job....


On Tuesday June 19th, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:
Ooh...she reminds me of me! *help me* No really, this is one of the greatest things I've ever read I think. Wow wow wow.


On Wednesday April 25th, 2007, prettydisgrace (144) writes:
i love this,i love all your work...especially PLASTIC BALLERINA.i must honestly say its the best peice of poetry i have ever read.you are truely gifted.joleen


On Saturday January 13th, 2007, Angelic Darkness (40) writes:
She thinks she dreams but in dreams does she think she knows? Great write. ~*~Angi


On Sunday November 5th, 2006, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
I totally agree with what antiScripsony says below. Jane, it's almost 2years since you last posted a poem, here's hoping you come back soon with an almighty bang.


On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, antiScripsony (40) writes:
jane be jane. you're better that way. not when you tryin'. imitating something. you think you saw... so jane be jane. i know sometimes that might drive them away. let 'em stay there, you don't need them anyway


On Friday February 3rd, 2006, An Expired Member (21) writes:
wow


On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, An Expired Member (1) writes:
You are so freaking grate!!!!!!


On Tuesday January 31st, 2006, MindRape (902) writes:
I miss you :(


On Thursday October 27th, 2005, LiP Stiches (57) writes:
!(*^(*^$@^*_speachless_)*&(^$#@!


On Saturday August 6th, 2005, Solace (1420) writes:
This is a brilliant piece, an amazing expression that just affixes itself to your heart in an endearing broken way...


On Friday July 15th, 2005, Astra Dei (649) writes:
i enjoyed this


On Friday June 3rd, 2005, Yesterday (27) writes:
I love the way this turned out. I, sometimes feel that I dream in colours, but then again.. I wake up. Wonderful job.


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Litteratus (75) writes:
the readers dream when they read this one. excellent work!


On Thursday May 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (23) writes:
why is it the greatest poets try to remain hidden throughout life?


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (21) writes:
your work is my muse


On Wednesday May 4th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (778) writes:
You always have that flow that a lot of us strive for but can never accomplish. Great write. ~*~Tart~*~


On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, urbanhumility (1325) writes:
beautiful in its self-discovery............well done......urban


On Tuesday March 1st, 2005, manunkind (89) writes:
oh cre, where have thou gone? DP IS EMPTY without you!! anyway, beautiful write, as always. you've done such a good job with the


On Tuesday March 1st, 2005, manunkind (89) writes:
imagery in the first line, that when i read this poem, i saw the entire thing in black and white. :) please come back!! we miss you!


On Saturday February 26th, 2005, rondant (76) writes:
beautiful.....Ronda


On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, Lydia Jade (796) writes:
this whole poem was mesmerising a few lines drug me in more then others but this is brilliant...great job


On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, Jonas (885) writes:
visions of our dreams moving past us, grinding in the mill of time until we have a fine dust of regret that blows away on a crisp wind from the sea... screaming, this is our spilt milk. beautiful, your flair for the melancholy is unmatched


On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, Drifter (378) writes:
Once again, proof you earned that little crown in the corner. Wonderful


On Friday December 10th, 2004, An Expired Member (53) writes:
*Phenomenal*..I am jealous from ur talent..well done..Imad


On Sunday December 5th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (316) writes:
Your words kept me thinking. The lovely wash of colors and environmental portraits made this piece very easy to read.


On Sunday December 5th, 2004, island warrior (306) writes:
I can see why you're royalty, very enjoyable read.


On Thursday December 2nd, 2004, Kfritz (18) writes:
amazing read...


On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, Valentine (513) writes:
I found myself dreaming of darting through sapphire skies . . over fair poppy fields . . with some undiscovered purpose. The cold-weather coats . . the autumn days . . This is simply a marvel. Paramount. ~ Rose


On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, Stormcomin (43) writes:
Excellent. "cold-weather coats and someone else's chill she never could get warm -she never will-" is what hit for me. And it didn't stop there.


On Friday November 19th, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:
Well, dammit, that was my favourite part too. Must be because it's fabulously expressed that I was beaten to quoting it in a comment. heheh. Beautiful write.


On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, Zhee (642) writes:
this was such a passionate piece of work.. really touched me.. wonderful and profound!


On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, frozen (756) writes:
YOU are fantastic!! Sorry...got a little excited there... geesh...a little? Okay...a lot. Excellent writing...loved this


On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, slow.burn.star (95) writes:
ive taken the path. seeing blue memories splattered on the grass. deep and dark---and no one remembers.


On Monday November 15th, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:
Quite the write and read...the first line reminded me of a Pearl Jam lyric "She dreams in color, she dreams in red" (Better Man)...indirectly profound and masterfully illustrative. Fabulous.


On Monday November 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:
nice write its... Deep.



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