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blue moon nights

blue moon nights
so pretty out
picture perfect backdrop
without a doubt

cold night-fingers
breeze in your ear
chilling landscape
inspires fear

glass-still waters
crystallized death
mirrored masterpiece
frozen breath

one blinking star
caught in your eye
frosty tears
waiting to die

unyielding wood
burns bright white
pinch - still alive
survived this night

ashes and smoke
hot dirty breath
small price to pay
for outlasting Death

cold little heart
fists clenched tight
won't be long
till the next blue moon night.

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On Tuesday September 18th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (387) writes:

Your use of imagery here is splendid and as universal as some of the images you describe! Lovely!

On Saturday March 18th, 2006, urbanhumility (1374) writes:

your economy of words .....captures what is needed............well done........well said............urban

On Thursday October 27th, 2005, LiP Stiches (60) writes:

wow..............i really like your decrition of the night.............YOU ROCK!

On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (21) writes:

You remind me of Robert Frost the way you describe your settings

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:

this is a very unique perspective, great words great flow, good job ~Emptyness~

On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

ahh memories...i liked it-X

On Monday August 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:

I have so many of these nights~Rachel~

On Tuesday July 13th, 2004, serpentine_fire (207) writes:

so beautiful. love the imagery. awesome ~serpentine~

On Monday February 9th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:

oooh...gave me chills. FF

On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

i was sad to see this one end. i caught up in it...but when it did end it was sadly beautiful cre.:)

On Thursday January 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (20) writes:

Pretty cool cre, I like the short staccato lines, it gave the poem a neat lyrical quality; it sounds really good read aloud. Good images in there, too; that's something that I haven't seen a whole lot of yet on DP, though I havent been here long.

On Thursday January 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (20) writes:

I only have one thing I don't like about that one, and it's incredibly picky. I have heard the glass-still waters line too many times, maybe consider a more unique description. Told you it was picky :)

On Friday September 5th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:

Does this have anything to do with Once in a blue moon? No? Damnit...didn't think so. There goes all my dreams. Lovely write.

On Monday September 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

you're very talented. like everyone else...i loved it

On Monday May 26th, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:

Damn, I do believe that you just get better and better as time goes on. ~ mw

On Monday May 26th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (621) writes:

How alone and little. Beautiful...~DW~

On Sunday April 13th, 2003, Stranger (297) writes:

Allot has been said about this poem already. Just had to add my 2 cents; I love it.

On Tuesday April 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:

Not to reiterate what has been said, but this is fantastic...short and precise. Thanks for the welcome!

On Sunday April 13th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

The eloquence of this piece touched me in a way i cannot fully describe - its subtlety of meaning is extremely touching.

On Friday April 11th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

you've been good for quite some time i suspect. hehe. you are so good. :)

On Tuesday April 8th, 2003, Lady_Ahz (80) writes:

Beautiful

On Wednesday April 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

seemed like you were writing about being immortal for awhile there, but then i lost what the poem was about exactly. none-the-less, i still like it.

On Friday March 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:

fuck'n talented you are.consider me a fan..

On Thursday March 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

very well done, stunning visual, strong metaphors...cool

On Thursday March 20th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (407) writes:

wow you are an amazing writer great work

On Wednesday March 12th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

GREAT READ!...can't say more than that

On Monday March 10th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

this is not one of those "novice" poems. This is well thought and writen! great, wonderful! :X

On Thursday March 6th, 2003, shadowsinthelight (208) writes:

wonderful, S.

On Saturday March 1st, 2003, changed_angel (59) writes:

Oh the wonderful taste in darkness's powers....I like it...great job...it flows wonderfully.

On Friday February 28th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

picturesque

On Tuesday February 18th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

good stuff rhythmic and cold and dark like. wunderliscious. Jonas

On Sunday February 16th, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

i agree with the first two comment holders ..... this is a wonderful write .. nicely done

On Monday February 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (10) writes:

wonderful, this poem moved me jane =o) Lol -PoP RoXx n KoKe-

On Sunday February 16th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Wow...it really took me on a journey...I love journeys!

On Sunday February 16th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

How wonderful...the rhyme, the short style...it gets right to the point...well done!!!

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