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-as the mother to her child-
-and a god to his creation-
-fear the day the tables turn-
-for you built your own damnation-your lips kissed and breathed
and something died inside of me
broken, though something else and something new
lay born and softly learning
lay hoping and silently lay yearning
to someday kill and oh, to break you too

to whisper in the wind
that stole into my room
beyond the shadows and the gloom
to suck this scent
this stale cologne
this bleeding grip that would never let me be
alone
these glances, oh they linger
in the hallways as I pass
and these mirrors that I shatter
deny your words that claim it never mattered
and I know someday you'll die with me at last- - -

-just because I sit and do not speak-
-just because you hear no sound from me-
-does not mean I feel no rage inside-
-does not mean I don't still wait for you to die-- - -

usque ad nos iterum conveniemus,
Godspeed.






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On Friday September 28th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
Beautifully dar piece - reminds me a bit of Poe, for some reason. I miss seeing new things from you, but I'm glad to at least be able to read some of your stuff. Ciao, Steve


On Monday January 3rd, 2005, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
I enjoyed the entire poem. The first stanza though, sounds absolutely scholarly. I really believe you are gifted with more than ordinary insight.


On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
Some how, I saw and touched so much more of this poem tonight, then I did the first time I read it. Since, I must have read it a good 15x. Just thought I'd leave a note, letting you know this didn't drift from my mind like so much usualy does0:)


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
wow! awesome! this was just fabulously done.


On Sunday September 26th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
*Slightly creeped out now.*


On Friday September 24th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
soaked with intense feelings & wow, what strong emotions conjured after i read this..wonderfully done piece of work. -MeL-


On Sunday September 19th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
Some times your poetry doesn't give me thought, or words per say, but pictures that take time for me to interpret, and once I do, the scene is amazing,as with "Until We Meet Again".


On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, Jonas (867) writes:
the gray lines are definitely worth noting... beautifully ugly and haunting. hi, janie-pie, by the by.


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
Oh dear, Cre...in all the years that I have been a fan you have never ceased to amaze me. You are the pinnacle of poetic beauty...every time I think that I have read your best you surprise me with another master piece. ~Faerie~


On Thursday August 12th, 2004, Sharon Rose (639) writes:
the meter is excellent, as purr said..really, I doubt there's much more I can say here, except I do know this feeling and you, as always, express it so well


On Thursday August 12th, 2004, Sharon Rose (639) writes:
oh, and by the way....no going away again, dammit!!! ;P


On Thursday August 12th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
So captivating, really delicate and beautifully flowing. A really beautiful kind of saddness, one that I admire. Amazing work, engulfing.


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, antiScripsony (39) writes:
usque means always, ad means to, nos means we, iterum means again and conveniemus means we meet. A better translation would be "Dum conveniemus iterum". Nos isn't required, but you can add it for emphasis.


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:
I hate latin.. for instance, 'again' could be denuo (anew-a second time) or iterum (again and again-a second time).. my head hurts...


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, antiScripsony (39) writes:
Dig the wordzez. I totally want to know who it's about. And I hope it's not... me... that you wait to die... plz? You write sort of like me in your eyes, as you leave me desperate to pick your brain.


On Thursday August 12th, 2004, cre (508) writes:
you freak, of course I don't wait for you to die :P


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
LOVE the opening stanza - excellent metre, as ever, also... true high quality from you, unfailingly. :)


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, Six-Out (1826) writes:
Jane...you've been gone for a while...but this proves that talent does not dwindle. Great write..as usual.


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, indefined (716) writes:
this was absolutely sic, much appreciation for this peice cre, a diamond in the dust, love the style of this.


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, Jeremy (27) writes:
Awesome work hun, Just wish I knew what inspired it... 'There is no Apple'


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, glasshouse (802) writes:
Wow. I loved this piece. The second stanza especially caught me. There is much more below this surface, and oh what I wouldnt give to see it's truth entirely. You've intrigued me. Very good piece. Very good indeed. -Glass


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, Choronzon (235) writes:
That is one amazing poem. It begins perfectly, ends perfectly. Great flow and rhymes. Just great poem. Nice work, dude.


On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, cre (508) writes:
I want that next to last line to say "Until We Meet Again" soo if there happens to be a latin genius amongst you who can correct what I'm sure I have penned incorrectly, please let me know. Much obliged.



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