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love me this way

love me in my plastic house
when things get shaky
the snow falls down
frosting the two foot pine and
windows blank on the inside
love me in my souvenir swirl
the light bends and softens up the glare
and sparkles make it seem easier to believe
that all is good and love is safe
and life -if cold- is fair
love me in my snowglobe world
you can't reach me
but that's what makes it all ok.

-love me this way-

or love me not at all.

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On Thursday January 12th, 2006, An Expired Member (7) writes:

just for the record I didn't mean U in my comments... shit That U was intended 2 b an I. My apologies. Mantus Man

On Thursday January 12th, 2006, An Expired Member (7) writes:

very well written poem. I Hate Love, or maybe U just have never experienced it for real. nonetheless you wield a mighty lexicon. Mantus Man

On Sunday September 19th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

You use detail in your words I've never seen in any others poems, and I'm always left in awe (and a bit of envy;0) after reading a poem by Cre.

On Monday July 26th, 2004, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

What a great twist on the "built up walls" theme!

On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:

"love me in my snowglobe world you can't reach me but that's what makes it all ok" - you're ability to turn a phrase never disappoints. I seldom have time to comment anymore, but I always read your work. Ciao, T/S

On Thursday June 17th, 2004, gothemite (400) writes:

beautiful write, it was perfect in every possible way

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, anth (1621) writes:

i loved the flawless analogy and the wisdom of grace portrayed here, the message is strong and the words are beyond beautiful and life -if cold- is fair i loved that part and the last two lines

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

Oh, Cre...I can't express the happiness I feel to see a work from you I haven't read before. This piece is beautiful to say the least. You are so lovely...but I tell you that all the time, huh? Well it's true!! You're the best. =) ~Faerie~

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, capt_funguy (1006) writes:

small words , shouted , but muted .. so many levels to this .. touched upon , and convincing .. eloquent is an understatement here ... funguy

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Lost_Soul (43) writes:

Love and sadness go hand in hand and this piece shows it quite well. I envy your talent.

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, worm (133) writes:

look but don't touch... this piece speaks volumes about love as it is perceived... nicely done!

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Bast (1007) writes:

pretty and sad... but i think this speaks to a deeper foerm of love... the love that's still there when they can't get what they want... the love that's given without reciprocation needed. love without rules and limits and expectations. lovely.

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:

Love it... the end really brought it together... perfection!

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:

_this is sadness...with a great ammount of intense passion...the last two lines ended this piece with authority...as always superbly written...it speaks volumes to me...lovely,cre.:)tim

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Six-Out (1832) writes:

You need to write far more often girlie. I've missed stayin' up reading your stuff. It's good to see you're still alive. As always, rock on.

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Choronzon (238) writes:

Aww, I'll love you, Cre. Really nice work. I like it.

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