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I sip on these, the filigreed dreams,
To decorate my days with lace,
And the softly shaded blue,
Of cherished photo-memories,
And whispers of my perfect you.
And sleep falls,
Like silk beneath the waves,
As this softly washing shadow,
Spills onto my tongue
With words of fabled days.
And bring to me, the breeze,
That breathes of faint perfume,
This illusion I had hoped,
To have in place of you . . .
Though still the sun, shall sigh into the day,
Stealing into puddles left,
When the moon has slipped away.
These mornings find you leaving,
As the time for sleeping fades.
Yet still I press my lips,
To this my fantasy,
Though I know that you were never true,
Not even in my dreams.



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On Thursday May 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (23) writes:
the mist of dreams is more real than you think ...


On Tuesday April 13th, 2004, Lynaes (1148) writes:
Absolutely stunning. Thick and lush with beautifully worded imagery. I especially loved "Though still the sun, shall sigh into the day, Stealing into puddles left". I could see it all, so crisp and fresh. Gorgeous work. -L


On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, Jonas (885) writes:
i felt like a piece of silk floating on the breeze, y'know how sometimes something gets trapped in a little playful breeze and just flies around? then at the last as always happens i crash into a puddle of mud and think about my flying days...


On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, BoldSolitude (278) writes:
Beautifully expressed


On Friday February 27th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (615) writes:
There are good writers, and then there are excellent writers, but you are superb.


On Tuesday February 17th, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (195) writes:
Very imaginative piece, excellent work, marvelous piece, great job ~Emptyness~


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (1001) writes:
Very sad, though sometimes our dreams offer what little comfort as might be had. Beautifully done. ~Ship!


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, SilentStalker (1328) writes:
...should I smile or frown...this kinda makes me want to do both...very nice the way you wrote this... -Darun


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, flying_fox (801) writes:
oh Cre, you've outdone yourself with this one. Splendid beauty in every line. love it. FF


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Seraphic (301) writes:
*sigh* Just a deep breath, I think I felt my heart drop into my stomach, but that's a good thing, emotion is good :) *~seraph~*


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, sweetambrosia (104) writes:
I loved all the fantastic wording and imagery in this... it made me think of an elderly person looking back on their life, sad in the memories, but only sad because they were just memories now, and so long ago (not sure if that made any sense)... there ar


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, sweetambrosia (104) writes:
there are so many great lines in this that I cannot laud just one. --sweets


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:
Cre! *does the happy dance* I've missed your works so! This is completely and utterly beautiful even in its despair. "I sip on these, the filigreed dreams" excellent line. Brilliant wording :)


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:
truly saddening cre. the last few lines were a nice close. truly painful to even read..let alone for you to write. well done.


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:
...your writing is...well,beyond my capabilities of doing any justice.the beauty flows through every word of this .really breath taking.thankyou,cre:)tim


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, frost bite (48) writes:
this was really cool, I think we can all relate to this, it's nice to read your work again, it's been a while.


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (629) writes:
You poured your heart out into this, I can feel the need for what you cannot have, great write.


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, knightmirror (426) writes:
WOW.amazing piece.nicely written with magnificent wordplay.*thumbs up*


On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:
oh so beautiful and so heartrending; and a feeling i've had more than one time myself. wonderful write. :) purr



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