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tired of the way the sun breaks
when it shatters through the blinds
the dust of passing chapters
lingering inside
a sudden loss of levity
a certain lack of grace
these moments and their memories
forget how things have changed
and I still will cry
adrift within this song
but it's different now
not exactly broken, not entirely wrong
simply winding down
waiting for the fade
letting go of having to be
something someone else has made
and weariness seems
to bring a sort of peace
like warmth to hold the weeping
as they lay aside their dreams
and though this day is long
it will not escape the night
for this is the way of the world
this is the way of goodbye



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On Sunday April 13th, 2008, Circe Avalon (183) writes:
tragically romantic in the way that you express the end.The fade out. I loved it. It made my chest constrict with apprehension


On Thursday April 10th, 2008, Chunky (60) writes:
this was sent to me as my poem of the day. i have to give you props, made a shiver go down my back.


On Saturday January 12th, 2008, totaltrip (43) writes:
i am in love with this.


On Friday January 11th, 2008, Circe Avalon (183) writes:
very good work, I liked the harmony in the rhyme.


On Thursday April 29th, 2004, aXe FactoR (432) writes:
yes...i'm so weary too...and yes...i'm tryin to let go of something so heavy now... i love this... "sobs"


On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, BoldSolitude (278) writes:
I enjoyed the whole poem but especially "letting go of having to be something someone else has made"


On Monday December 15th, 2003, Drea (976) writes:
aside from what you think of me.. i love your work. this seemed fitting to what is going on in my life right now. your words ring with truth and power ~Drea~


On Sunday December 14th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
mmm...I think I will keep the feelings this one brings to me for myself. I think I need to tell you how strong this poem is but I don't have to words. Out of hundreds of goodbye poems...this one does not shine...it glows like the moon. ~JMDW~


On Sunday December 14th, 2003, Jadedwings (361) writes:
So very true...this poem, beautiful and increadable as it is is also REAL...this captures the spiral into losing someone in a very unique way...good job


On Sunday December 14th, 2003, unusual_blood (94) writes:
the way of goodbye is everywhere. you are a poetry goddess. *bows down* love the title.


On Saturday December 13th, 2003, Demosthenes (226) writes:
the letting go line... yeah, im not creative, everyone else loves it too... but with good reason. id say you never cease to amaze me, and it would be true, but id be repeating myself. -B


On Friday December 12th, 2003, Lost_Soul (43) writes:
Every time I read one of your poems, I am reminded of how talented you truly are. Needless to say, this is an amazing poem from an amazing writer.


On Friday December 12th, 2003, purr_verse (1483) writes:
"letting go of having to be something someone else has made"...magic. purr


On Friday December 12th, 2003, Six-Out (1832) writes:
Is.."God damn jane you rule" a good enough comment?


On Friday December 12th, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:
I think I relate alot to this poem. You know you allways keep me sitting like I do now. I see so much in many of your poems, that the feeling I get in the end is realy complex, and hard to describe in a comment.


On Friday December 12th, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:
So just want to say that im truly in love with your poetry. Tiger


On Friday December 12th, 2003, Drifter (378) writes:
"and weariness seems to bring a sort of peace like warmth to hold the weeping as they lay aside their dreams" This is why i want you to do that thingy...


On Friday December 12th, 2003, Nightingale (579) writes:
"letting go of having to be / something someone else has made " that struck me... oooh... cre... I love this... I love your writes... figured I'd remind you of that.



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