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Crush

I dream,
just to hold your hand, and
I am lost to imagination.
A sort of starry-eyed
fascination.
I would die to touch your hair.
I could perhaps,
collapse,
in a red-faced moment, shy.
I know you wonder why I sigh,
and swiftly look away.
It's just, you burn inside my heart,
but I hope you don't yet see me through.
I want to hide, but I fear it's clear to every eye,
that I am so in love with you . . .

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On Tuesday July 24th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (415) writes:

*BREATHLESS*

On Friday May 18th, 2007, blue (1760) writes:

... ~b

On Friday August 18th, 2006, blue (1760) writes:

On Thursday October 27th, 2005, blue (1760) writes:

ya know, I can't possibly say what this does for me.. truly a fav amongst favs. ~b

On Wednesday June 29th, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (86) writes:

lovely and light! Perfect flow

On Sunday February 20th, 2005, blue (1760) writes:

Oh, this is just so beautiful ~sigh~ I must have read this 10 times before I even singed up here, and ? how many times since. I Love It! ~b

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, ~SHeLL*BeLL~ (72) writes:

this is so cute!!

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, flying_fox (770) writes:

this is truely lovely...beautiful words. FF

On Thursday February 12th, 2004, Jonas (862) writes:

how very very very sweet *sigh* the sentiment and expression of it, i found quite lovely, honest, i can almost see the blush of white skin.

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Twilight (2104) writes:

pure unblemished raw emotion. absolutely beautiful cre.

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Twilight (2104) writes:

thisd means so much more t ome now. i shouldve seen its beauty before. amazing cre. i know how that feels!! woo hoo!

On Thursday December 11th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (689) writes:

Very romantic! Ciao, T/S

On Thursday December 11th, 2003, Jadednoir (38) writes:

nice piece... me likey the to the pointness... and it reminds me of how exactly it feels....... great: ~jaded~

On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, Raze Drake (103) writes:

ah.......just a dream, so real

On Tuesday December 9th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

Im So Glad To Arrive Back And See That Talent Never Wavers. Great. GPhD.

On Tuesday December 9th, 2003, sole (114) writes:

You really captured infatuation and put a value on it and while love poems aren't really my forte I can definitely appreciate this piece. As always an excellent write.

On Monday December 8th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (586) writes:

Ooooo....I love this! It's so much ligher then many of your works...impish in a shy way almost. It made me smile and get a warm feeling. Absolutely a splendid poem...well done dear poet! ~JMDW~

On Saturday December 6th, 2003, manunkind (89) writes:

i love poems like this. i love being in love, i love the infatuation. ahhh. this poem is relaxing. :)

On Friday December 5th, 2003, Seraphic (290) writes:

This is so incredibly sweet, it made me feel all warm and fuzzy :) *~seraph~*

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Drifter (364) writes:

Thats sweet. i love you to :)

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

This is so beautiful and sweetly put. It left with the urge to say "awww" And I got a warm little tingle...

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Choronzon (236) writes:

A wonderful poem.

On Tuesday December 2nd, 2003, CarpeDiemJane (42) writes:

i'm so in this situation. good precision. i like. i like.

On Tuesday December 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:

that first glimps of new love, this was like a memory of my first case of puppy love, it wasn't until the smile was returned did I know it was more, lovely write,S/M

On Monday December 1st, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

dahck dahck dahck! too good, cre. too good. -B

On Monday December 1st, 2003, Bast (900) writes:

awwww! it's filled with lace edged valentines to a secret love, and bubble baths where you're free to daydream of being with them always... sweet, darling work.

On Monday December 1st, 2003, Lost_Soul (39) writes:

I completely agree with maddin. I can just feel the love pouring out of this poem.

On Monday December 1st, 2003, purr_verse (1438) writes:

extremely emotive and painfully honest... a lovely piece of work. purr

On Monday December 1st, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

What a feeling of happiness and love in this......the energy just flows incredibly....maked me smile all over.

On Monday December 1st, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (195) writes:

This was excellent, great flow, and just plain beautiful, i truely admire work like this, great job, ~Emptyness~

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