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Admittedly a Cutter

as the night falls
and darkness grows
I try to think of other things
but time seems painfully slow
across the room
the glint of a sharpened blade
catches my worried eyes
and suddenly everything fades
Lost in this world
I forget the words of my friends
I know what must be done
this tangled madness has to end
I reach for the instrument
the tool of my relief
Biting back a tear
I promise myself that it will be brief
I close my eyes
and I slash here and there
It's done, and I smile
Ohh! This style looks awesome on my HAIR!

haha! *chuckles*

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On Friday May 23rd, 2008, Geisha (779) writes:

Hehe

On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (164) writes:

I missed your sense of humor. Glad to be back and reading your works again! -Heather-

On Friday November 24th, 2006, SaraJane (43) writes:

yep, i fell for it... what a twist!

On Sunday October 29th, 2006, An Expired Member (131) writes:

lol that was great

On Tuesday May 17th, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple (49) writes:

ha ha, fuckin awesome!

On Monday April 11th, 2005, so_skeevy (77) writes:

Sweet man. totally good.

On Monday April 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

Saved by that last line!

On Wednesday March 16th, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:

That was awesome lol. I totally fell for it. God one.

On Thursday March 10th, 2005, An Expired Member (24) writes:

hahahaha, love it! great write!

On Monday February 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:

Good job man!

On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Im_going_to_cry_now (24) writes:

I applaud this poem

On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, Rain In The Willows (862) writes:

heh, And here I was prepaired to leave a bitchy comment...thanks for spairing the stale bs...love it

On Wednesday November 24th, 2004, Rone4611 (157) writes:

That was hallarious! Great write.

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (61) writes:

haha that was very clever. i loved the twist it was very funny and i laughed every time i read it. amazing.

On Thursday October 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (55) writes:

nice! i've read this poem several times, and never once has it not made me laugh! great ;)

On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Zara Synn (76) writes:

Ah, you had me going there for a minute! hehe. Awesome twist.

On Friday September 3rd, 2004, mysticventures (547) writes:

excellent jest!!

On Friday September 3rd, 2004, Jonas (862) writes:

clever clever ;-)

On Friday September 3rd, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (344) writes:

*laughs* This is awesome! Bravo!

On Tuesday July 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (27) writes:

sehr gut. great (anti)climax

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, Storm (185) writes:

hehe, how sneaky sneaky of you.´Good one.

On Friday April 2nd, 2004, Lemons (57) writes:

I enjoy this poem uber much!

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

Yeah, awesome write, I can't say anything that hasnt been said already so I'll just leave it at that...

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Mindless fairy (10) writes:

This is great! gotta love it! ~~The Mindless One~~

On Saturday November 15th, 2003, sole (114) writes:

hah the ol bait and switch. I was all ready to get cloudy eyed and you dropped a bomb. Well done.

On Tuesday November 11th, 2003, finaldestiny (98) writes:

omg this has got to be this best poem! absolutly perfect!~finaldestiny~

On Saturday October 25th, 2003, Drea (935) writes:

LMAO... i was all.."hummm cre? a cutter?" yeah ok this was just too funny.. i'm still rolling. ~Drea~

On Saturday October 25th, 2003, Trichotillomaniac (49) writes:

Love it! You made it sound as if you were upset in the beginning. I'm sure you're hair does look AWESOME!

On Friday October 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:

HHAAA. Love it. I was a little worried with the title but I love this. Great job. You've lightened my spirits. *n*a*

On Tuesday October 21st, 2003, Seraphic (290) writes:

hehe priceless, i love it *~seraph~*

On Tuesday October 21st, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

Hehehe... *falls on the floor and starts laughing harder*. Bri-llli-ant ;)

On Saturday October 18th, 2003, manywalks (952) writes:

Hehehehe, ah, thank you, I needed that. ~ mw

On Saturday October 18th, 2003, Loserland (134) writes:

i sense the sarcasm but you play it perfectly...well done

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:

lol awsome i love it

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (164) writes:

wery well done :)

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (164) writes:

a laugh needed.

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, TheMistressBucket (19) writes:

Hahaha! How fucking cool! You had me going for a sec...What a lovely twist! ;)

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

Hehehe... Finally, A Cutter Poem I Can Actually Read. Thanks, GPhD.

On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (586) writes:

Wit at its best! hehe...of course I had to go back and reread a second time just for a full belly laugh. Funnier yet...hehe...I did that once! Got mad and chopped off my hair!! hehe...I loved this! ~JMDW~

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, Raven (378) writes:

Ha! fucking awesome! Good ending... _Raven

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, GothicBlack (269) writes:

HAHAHA! this one's great! i love the ending... perfect. ~gothic~

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, Six-Out (1825) writes:

God damn you Jane, had me going for a bit. I was afraid I'd have to leave you a nasty comment :-D. Heh, good stuff.

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:

LOL nice cre, thanks for the laugh. ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, SilentStalker (1338) writes:

...lovely, just lovely...I like the creativity on this...I don't get to laugh often, so this was nice... -Darun

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

score! hehehe, awesome write cre :)

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, Bast (900) writes:

hah! see, i did comment. :P

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, cre (508) writes:

hehehe i ran to the phone too fast to see before! :P heee.

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

LMAO....okay I really am cracking up here at work...hopefully no one will come in while I rolling around in my chair laughing. Oh this is too funny! Cutter poems of the world beware! For this one is the best of them all...

On Monday January 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (14) writes:

okay...that kind of offended me...*looks uncomfortable*..........

On Monday January 5th, 2004, cre (508) writes:

I'm sorry . . it's just . . *bites back a tear* I HAVE to cut my hair sometimes .. it relieves the pain inside . . it's the only way I can be heard . . nobody understands . . *collapses into sobs*

On Monday January 5th, 2004, Six-Out (1825) writes:

*consoles jane* You DON'T have to do it.

On Tuesday January 6th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

I know how you feel, Cre. I...I...*breaks down* I just can't stop cutting my hair! Maybe we can work this out together...we'll be strong for one another...*sniff sniff*

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