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I remembered
that one week ago today
was your birthday

I remember
the twilight zone and late hours
and how you shielded my eyes
when the monsters were too scary
I wonder if you knew then
who the real monsters were

I remember
tipping down the street
on my new l'il sweet stuff bike
six years old and living in a dangerous world
but I still felt safer in your shadow

I remember
ten years old and confused
a little boy down the street
spitting rudeness at me
until you kindly reminded him
that he didn't want to mess with your little sister,
after all.
I think that day I must have glowed
in pride and quiet security

I remember
teenage years
my anger passed off as adolescent rage
but you captured a moment
in seclusion
to meet your eyes with mine and say
"I wish I could have taken you away"

I remembered your birthday
in silence
a thousand miles away
though a broken world keeps us
far and apart
I love you, deeply
with every breath of my heart

perhaps tonight
a moon of twilight hours
will whisper, and you will recall
how once upon a time,
in a little girl's world,
you were everything that mattered.



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On Monday July 9th, 2007, AHHH (244) writes:
that gave me chills. i fucking felt that poem. and that was terrific even if you pulled it out of your ass.


On Monday September 6th, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (348) writes:
Beautiful and poignant.


On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, BoldSolitude (278) writes:
his was touching, you have a captivating way of expression.


On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (316) writes:
Amazing. I may have to steal this masterpiece idea and transpose it for my little sister's birthday comming up!


On Wednesday September 24th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:
Beautiful piece that gave me peace - very tender, very real and very attainable. Ciao, T/S


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, worm (133) writes:
I stand and applaud! this is poetry as it is meant to be! lovely, heartfelt and wonderfully poignant! cre, it is no wonder why I like your writing so much...


On Monday September 22nd, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
Connections run deep, long and forever when their "really" made. You displayed this so well. I know that the word "beautiful" is used so often on your work it might at times begin to as if it's lost it's appeal as a compliment...however...that is exactly


On Monday September 22nd, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
what this is....magnificently beautiful. ~JMDW~


On Monday September 22nd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:
Cre, that was completely beautiful. You never fail to impress.


On Sunday September 21st, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1879) writes:
A well writen display of feelings. It touched me. Monkey


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, Inevitability (645) writes:
ah...a true protector a big brother you had...mine was a shadow my mother sent away to boarding school...he was distant enough to worship, but never close enough to know....


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, Six-Out (1832) writes:
It's sad how things turn out...if only they didn't have to change.


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (383) writes:
This was truly captivating...an overwhelming feelng came as I was invaded with memories of my own..wonderful write all the way.


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, Delilah (140) writes:
This was beautiful...I liked it...~Delilah~



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