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you tell me it's convenient
the way I always fade away
that I love exquisite pain
too much to ever say
good bye
but I don't know
and what do you know,
anyway
you tell me I can't let it go
but it's hot tonight
and there are no tears, no rain
to cool my skin
and again
again
I feel the air collapsing in
just let go
let me go
cause you don't know
I don't think you know

you know it's not convenient
you point out my fallacies
don't you think I see
it's just hot tonight
and I can't find a ride on this road
this road
and you say you know
but I don't think you do
just let go
let me go
cause you don't see my sky
and you don't, you just don't know

you tell me
baby, be convenient
I know your sky is burning
but I've things to do today
pencil you in next week
okay . . .
okay

I know I fade away
I only love exquisite pain
but it's too cold tonight
and every star is searing my skin
and I'll tell you goodbye
goodbye
again
it's the only road
the only place left to go
it's just convenient, after all
you know . .
you know.



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On Friday April 30th, 2004, Lynaes (1148) writes:
This is wonderful, beautifully heartbreaking. As I read this I imagined it as a song. "you tell me it's convenient the way I always fade away that I love exquisite pain" that was gorgeous and sorrowful. Amazing work. -L


On Monday April 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (278) writes:
Its sad when a relationship decays into this, or just never grew past this. Very well expressed.


On Friday October 24th, 2003, Mademoiselle_Minx (147) writes:
you tell me/baby, be convenient/I know your sky is burning/but I've things to do today/pencil you in next week okay...heh. this line in particular caught my attention.reminds me of someone recently...**sighs** anyways!your works amaze me...


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:
Means will cease to matter, It matter not what means meant, In your sky a day will come, Words of pain shall become numb. Tiger


On Friday September 5th, 2003, Six-Out (1832) writes:
I wish I could say I loved this...but I feel is how shitty it is that you had to go through this. I'm sorry Jane.


On Friday September 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:
awesome piece, i really liked the way you repeated things.


On Thursday September 4th, 2003, manywalks (972) writes:
This wended its way into my very soul; poignant and nearly mournful. ~ mw


On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, anathema (66) writes:
this is so so amazingly sad... there's nothing like feeling like you can be put aside until there's a moment to spare... especially when it's the one you love saying it. :(


On Monday September 1st, 2003, fuck you (31) writes:
The ending was my fav part. I mean the whole work was great but I liked the ending a little more. Nicely done...


On Monday September 1st, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (1001) writes:
"cause you don't see my sky and you don't, you just don't know" It's sad that sometimes people refuse to set you free when they, in your mind, must blatantly know that's for the best. Very sad write but well written ~Urban Shipwreck~


On Saturday August 30th, 2003, Jonas (885) writes:
a song spun of silver thread... cordite the smell of a shotgun shower of emotion and the lack of love and devotion when you feel you're filed under 'some time'


On Saturday August 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:
wow, that was imaginative.....highly specialized. pleasently exciting. an exellent establishment...good stuff


On Saturday August 30th, 2003, _Andrew_ (302) writes:
beautiful cre, i love how you ended it especially, awesome *~*aNDReW*~*



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