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What the night cloaks,
The sun shall never see.
I tried to relay this,
But you refused to see.
You touched me,
Thinking you could heal,
A life that's been too broken,
To ever want to feel.
I hoped to love the sunrise,
In its shade of gentle blue.
I cried inside its beauty,
But I tried because of you.
I walked among the waves,
Of twilight's quiet shore.
You watched to see me smile,
But I only felt it more -
The eyes inside my dreams,
And the terrors that I see.
The world that I want out of,
If you'd just let go of me.
I am kept immobile,
By ties that forever bind.
I'm dying for escape,
But there's turmoil in my mind.
You are a shackle,
As surely as the chains,
That kept me bound and silent,
And tortured with their pain.
I am begging mercy,
Though I hold out little hope.
Peace is all I want,
But you have to let me go . . .




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On Saturday September 20th, 2003, Nadir (630) writes:
Fingers will stop to obey there mistress, Trying to grab what she know she lost, It is then I hope to see, Her power in a moment just, Controling the final touch. Tiger


On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:
beautiful write... i feel like it relates to me somehow, perhaps its just this vast emptiness im feeling right now, *~*aNDReW*~*


On Sunday August 17th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
The pain is so alive in this piece and yet it's almost like you've dealt with it already. It does get better and you have friends to help you get over it. Good write.


On Saturday August 16th, 2003, Bast (896) writes:
chew your fetters, love,m and bolt for the forests and the wild freedoms you deserve and belong to... sometimes that which bind us will never let us go, and we have to tear them apart ferally finding survival in the bottom of a tea cup.


On Saturday August 16th, 2003, DarkAyla (57) writes:
Very nice work...it's sad, yet beautiful.


On Friday August 15th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
a sail to the sea is never smooth, well at least most of the time, the storm hits, and I can understand that sometimes it hits pretty hard, but afterwards everything is going to be OK. at the time being think about it inspiring a beautiful poem. =) <3{dia


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:
i felt this so incredibally deeply... i feel muchly the same right now... i hope all goes well for you..*hug* <3Dommi


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
I really liked the four lines after and including, "I hoped to love the sunrise". Sad poem but nicely written. ~Urban Shipwreck~


On Friday August 15th, 2003, urbanhumility (1356) writes:
profound and inter-woven with noble humility, your words somehow touch everyone, with specific and different taste, this is quite a feat, your prose is a "Touch-stone" to all, that have pain.........urban


On Friday August 15th, 2003, trowasrevolution (51) writes:
Wow this poem is chilling to the bone thats for sure. Relationships are things of beauty and yet full of dismay. I hope that things turn out for the better and all. Great work. You have a beautiful gift.


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
This is a plea that I could feel down to my bones. I always find so much gentle beauty in the sadness that you write about. It is a truly a gift to be able to turn pain into art.


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:
Jane...there's not much that can be said to this. Sad...heartfelt...true. I've read this over at least 5 times, and everytime it hits me more. It will get better...I hope.



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