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I've gathered sand . . .
I let it fly
Every time
The stillness dies . . .
To see the grains
In the grasp of a wind
Tossed with no meaning
I understand then . .
My tears are as dry
As the sun-swept dunes
A little less than nothing left
To win or to lose . .

I've gathered years
I let them fail
Penned by another
Someone else's tale
A rising torrent
Of a drowning flood
Water's more deadly
But blood is blood
My hope is as broken
As the world that I live in
Days into years
But nothing's a given

I've gathered tears
From a once laughing heart
Every piece
Has been smashed all apart
A dying religion
And faded out eyes
These are the relics
Of a childhood's demise
My breath is as torn
As an unfulfilled dream
In this nightmare life's tainted
There's nothing left for me.



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On Monday May 14th, 2007, Eric (89) writes:
This is really well written, great job!


On Monday April 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
"My hope is as broken as the world that I live in" definately my favorite line from this. Very vivid imagery and effective use of oxymorons.


On Saturday August 16th, 2003, Ravenblade (275) writes:
I don't know what to say about this write...its just so beautiful...great write.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
I was impressed at the first stanza...hung on a cliff through the middle... then pushed off at the end, a depressing impresion left on me


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
Almost made me cry, so powerful and sad. Jane you out do yourself. Wonderful write.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
Saddly beautiful, if something can be thoughs two things at once then this was..................O.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
"My breath is as torn As an unfulfilled dream"...you made your words flow with such delicacy..it's easy to be swept in...lovely all the way.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
I have felt like I was drifting on the winds of despair while I read this. Lonely and haunting. One of my favorites from you.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, CarpeDiemJane (42) writes:
Very deep. i like it.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, DarkAyla (57) writes:
Thsi is really good, Literally as I was reading this, it took my breath away, Great Write


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (991) writes:
Very powerful, I really enjoyed this one. The feeling of losing everything without having had anything to lose. Great poem. ~Urban Shipwreck~


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Nadir (618) writes:
I read a couple of times. I wanted to get a real feel of it. You are indeed talented to write like this. I will read more of you works, that is for sure.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Six-Out (1819) writes:
So much sorrow....so much despair. I can feel this one. I've read it about 4 times over now, and it gets stronger every time. I can see what you write. Weather you think it's one of your best or not, this is a favorite of mine. I hope things get better, I


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Six-Out (1819) writes:
I really do. You deserve more than pain and sorrow. Much more.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (51) writes:
I love this.....not to mention u used my favorite word ( tainted) but this is simply wonderful ...¤Alley¤ a job well done



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