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 *this is a poem of rage and wishful thinking. I know it isn't my best work by far but the intent was more of a giving voice to anger and retribution*


My finger's starting to tremble,
And the sweat just hit the floor.
Gotta lick my too-dry lips,
As I glance up at the door.

I'm glad I thought to close it,
And you know it's locked up tight.
You're the one with a dead-bolt fetish,
Guess that means you lose this fight.

Cause it leaves you two to one,
And you're bound to end up dead.
You know I'll win with this loaded gun,
Pointed right at your goddamned head.

I can't believe this moment,
Has finally come to pass.
You've no idea how many nights,
I've dreamed of kicking your stupid ass.

And yes, I know I'm shaking,
I can admit that I'm afraid.
You fucked with my head so many times,
In so many different ways.

But I knew someday I'd get the chance,
To make you pay for all your lies.
For every time you hurt me,
You're less than nothing in my eyes.

You know you should have killed me,
When you dared put a gun to my face.
I may have been a child then,
But I knew how to wait.

You have no upperhand now,
And it's funny to see your tears.
You never cared when I cried, did you?
You only gave me more to fear.

So now it's time to say good-bye,
Count your last breaths - 1 - 2 - 3.
While you die just keep in mind -
You NEVER should have fucked with me.




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On Monday January 31st, 2005, blue (1780) writes:
Retribution has a wonderful taste...very strong write cre...happy hunting! ~b


On Monday January 31st, 2005, Linwe (30) writes:
dreamed of! ;) (and yes, he is a bad guy..) Thanks for sharing all you anger and frustrations with us!


On Monday January 31st, 2005, Linwe (30) writes:
This isn't one of your best works?? But I love it! (I have to admit that your other writings are extremely nice to read as well!) I can totally relate to it in my own way and I just kicked my ex-boyfriend's ass in a way that I could have never dreamed of!


On Sunday September 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:
(Chuckled laugh) Paybacks a bitch!


On Monday April 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (278) writes:
This is another of yours I remember reading before I was a member. Reading it made me remember the sadness I felt when I read it the first time.


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:
A lesson in every child, When time do not heal, Healing skills might heal the time, A lesson in every child, A wish, No torment ever, Teach a gift. Tiger


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
You're rage poetry shows your anger so well while keeping the wonderful cadence of your work. This is a great write.


On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, Six-Out (1832) writes:
Holy shit jane. Where did that come from? Rage works well for you. In the poetic sense that is. I'm sorry for the pain of going through this, but god damn, I loved the read.


On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, DarkAyla (57) writes:
sry, i wrote too much, let me finish, I am an instant fan! GREAT Job!


On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, DarkAyla (57) writes:
I love it! You are very good at this, I really look forward to seeing more of ur work! It was indeed very powerful and i think it showed alot of emotion, i cant show alot of emotion thru my work, why cant i write like you? Wow, you blow me away. I am an


On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:
Well... May I be damned twice. Smile*


On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:
Well I'll be damned... you made me smiled.


On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, Aurora_Light (564) writes:
a great and powerful write


On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, baryl (7) writes:
i'm very jealous. my best stuff isn't near as good as that. you say it wasn't your best, but i liked it very much.



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