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In the darkness and the silence,
In the shadow of his ruin,
She lay still and broken-minded,
Though no one saw just what he'd done.
In the quietness of "after",
Though her lips did try to speak;
Her head forgot the words,
And her voice was just too weak.
In the horror and the knowledge,
Of a torn and falling sky,
Her soul disintegrated,
And dissolved into the night.

How one can take another,
And destroy a tender world;
To weave a waking nightmare,
For a sad and shattered girl.

In the darkness and the silence,
Of an end too soon begun;
She lay slain beneath his sin,
In the shadow of his ruin.



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On Friday November 9th, 2007, Circe Avalon (183) writes:
I loved this. yeah, loved...okay, now that I look like an ass....


On Saturday February 5th, 2005, Rabbit (27) writes:
Amazingly beautiful and sad. One of my favorates.


On Wednesday February 2nd, 2005, October Death (27) writes:
Frighteningly beautiful...*Adds you to my favories* I love your works


On Thursday July 24th, 2003, Bast (874) writes:
i really think i can only read this poem once. once more and it'd hit something in me i need someone here, physically, before i feel ok dealing with it. which means... well done.


On Thursday July 24th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (586) writes:
No way can I explain my feelings for this...but maybe...possibly a few of them in a visual metaphor. Like beautiful ghostly woman... saddened and mezmerized by the site of blood droplets floating through her hand.


On Wednesday July 23rd, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Liked This One. Too Good. GPhD.


On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, Inevitability (630) writes:
how can one take another and destroy a tender world...so much pain to live through and then to write so beautifully..I wish I had something way original to tell you, but all I can think is: sad yet beautiful.


On Monday July 21st, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
I feel the pain in this piece, it is crushing and sad. But the way it flowed and molded into my mind, it just shook me to the core. Great write.


On Monday July 21st, 2003, DoctorAsh (508) writes:
such a traumatizing write cre [powerful and crushing] Beutiful as always . yup yup


On Monday July 21st, 2003, Jonas (859) writes:
always piercing, like a sliver of light through perfect dark, white and radiant, but not quite enough to stifle the lack of light permeating this space... you own the spark, the flash of light contained but never owning the night


On Monday July 21st, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
beautiful the way you write...........O.


On Monday July 21st, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:
im going to call you jane for a minute, because it seems so much more honest. jane, you ARE, the AWESOMEST person, all moment. thats a good thing. very good. -B


On Monday July 21st, 2003, Six-Out (1819) writes:
Jane, I remember when you were still a wee poet that no one knew. I knew it wouldn't be long before you were the star of dp, and this is why. You have a way with words that makes my mouth drop. So much talent, and brains, and of course cuteness mixed in o


On Monday July 21st, 2003, Six-Out (1819) writes:
one person. I hope one day I can match your ability. :-D


On Thursday July 24th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (586) writes:
me too


On Monday July 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:
i can't figure out what to tell you about this, it was that good.. ****** six stars ( and noone EVER gets six stars :D)


On Monday July 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:
Woah Jane, Woah... I'll comment again when I figure out how to express my feelings towards this piece


On Monday July 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:
Jane, your words flow beautifully in this piece... It was brilliant... Bleeding with betrayal and fear at the same time.... absolutely wonderful


On Monday July 21st, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
beautiful..simply lovely...describes the terrible action of one affecting the other..nicely done.


On Monday July 21st, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
beautiful but bitter. always enjoyed. well done cre



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