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Always, To Me

For all I have hated you

In the past, and for all I may,

In future days.

I see you now

Waving gently with the passing wind

Swirling as the breeze kisses you again

A lotus

A delicately petaled beauty

Filmy veins that bore our touch

Though we barely whispered

Much.

Your skin to our gentle kiss

Was there

And paper-thin beauty

So ever fair

A remnant of our love's caress

And though through hate we did digress;

For all I have failed to love

In the day we saw and the days

Which may someday be.

I, bowing, acknowledge the Eve

The One you were . . .

Always my Mother,

Always . . . to me.

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On Thursday November 4th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

this was mind~blowing. your talent is amazing! ~sex~

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

absoultely astonishing. i did not expect the poem to end as it did. you always write beautifully, my friend. :)

On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, Bast (896) writes:

yes... oh yes, cre.

On Thursday June 26th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

Oh Cre....~sniffle~. You are beautiful to your soul...through every layer you are absolutely astonishingly beautiful. I feel this one deeply...and just...wow...maybe I'll comment later when not in the ~wow~ of this one.~DW~

On Wednesday June 25th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

Jane you weave words so beautifully, it caught me by surprise though with the ending. All in all, wonderful write.

On Wednesday June 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

I like it. :)

On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

I don't know what to say! I share the same feelings for my mother! This is a beautiful write! Well done Jane, well done! {Dk}

On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, Six-Out (1823) writes:

Wow, I did not expect that ending, especially considering some of your other work. I love this jane. Again, your mastery of words has capticated me. Bravo.

On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, SourInnocence (14) writes:

wow! i absolutely love that. you cant help but love your mother even when you hate her....great write. ~kelly

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