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It all came down to one thing
Dawdling through your yard
The grass kissing my toes
Like paupers at the feet of some king
The smug and smoggy air
Trying at a breeze
Yet
Quickly falling flat
And it was somehow worse for that
We stood, clutching our elbows
In the clingy confines
Of a day not well lived
You, winking out the sun
And shooting that look at me beneath haughty brows
Me, biting my lip and wondering
How
How to tell you all I ever wanted
Was to be all you'd ever need
How I only hoped to plant a different garden
In a bed of weeds
This time yielding flowers filled with dreams
I only wanted good
My eyes cried
At the sight
Of your greyed and chipping house
And I just thought . . .
I could paint it white again.




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On Sunday March 26th, 2006, whisperer (168) writes:
powerful, gripping in a "just listen" sort of way


On Thursday April 8th, 2004, Exodus (211) writes:
you pretty much poured this out of me with this one....i feel this so much....


On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, CharlottesWeb (599) writes:
I’m off, I know I am…but everything is almost tangible…but then it all floats away.


On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, CharlottesWeb (599) writes:
There is something about this that I can’t put my tongue on right now. Something sad, very, very sad that I can’t quite touch. A little subdued in a way that creates an ending that isn’t suppose to be there…not now, not at this chapter in the story. I’m o


On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, Bast (896) writes:
it's hard... you think you can fix it, make it better... but sometimes... the paint we use to fix things only peels right off again.


On Saturday June 21st, 2003, shadowsinthelight (210) writes:
I may have to quit reading your work. If I don't I may just fall in love with you. Again, wonderful. S.


On Saturday June 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:
wow. I dont know exactly what to say except what's already been said. I'm a better person for reading this.


On Friday June 20th, 2003, braindeadpoet (127) writes:
I am in awe of your writing. This is fantastic. You make me want to be a better writer...thank you.


On Friday June 20th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
This truly was one of your best. I think this is my favorite so far! The imagery is powerful and the words beautiful! ~D


On Friday June 20th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (423) writes:
jane. excellence is becoming standard for you


On Friday June 20th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
Jane this was expertly put together, full of symbolism and imagery. One of your best. Good work.


On Friday June 20th, 2003, Six-Out (1827) writes:
Stupid freeverse? That was fucking awesome, scuse the language. But serioulsy jane, I loved it.! You rule...ok, I rule, but this one puts you right up there next to me ;)


On Friday June 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:
hey...i like this one...-Misty


On Friday June 20th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
this is one of my favorites of yours so far... always enjoy reading you.



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