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Even the crying waves
Couldn't keep me, dead, afloat
Soaking in lies we fell
Like a broken chance at hope
While the scattered glance
Of a sadly weeping sun
Shattered on the surface
Of a glimpse at all you'd done
You pretended beauty
But your prism refracted less
I drowned beneath the current
And swallowed dimming protests
While the sky swam
And rained my hopes away
And my ears died
From the words I heard you say
Even the bucking waves
Couldn't carry me far enough
From your talons as they tore me
And your sadistic song of love
Like a tale of woe
The wind returned you to me
As I sank beneath the crest
Of a sad and dying sea.




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On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
Your words are truly captivating, I know I'm not the first or last to tell you this.


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, Nadir (618) writes:
...Of roses I have picked my share, I saw to unfold there beauty in raw force, A lifetime now to weep there loss, As I let them grow in me, on a sea of tears. Tiger


On Friday July 11th, 2003, Jonas (876) writes:
the wind howls through my ears and i swear there are voices there singing songs of dread in the scales of the dead she pulls me down into her grave i am buried there buried with her... beautiful work


On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, Bast (895) writes:
the sea may cry, cre... but it cannot ever be as moving as you.


On Wednesday June 25th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:
. ive found beauty


On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
this is indeed a portrait in my mind of a turbulent gray dying sea...i love this...GREAT write.


On Saturday June 21st, 2003, shadowsinthelight (210) writes:
Jeez. S.


On Saturday June 21st, 2003, CharlottesWeb (599) writes:
Wow... a picture clean and beautifuly...sad, ended..."can't seem to find the words". You've weaved picture, emotion and thought together in this so well it's impossible to identify each as only a part...this is amazing.~DW~


On Friday June 20th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
As I read this I was listening to the patter of raindrops on the roof, silent and forboding. Well done.


On Friday June 20th, 2003, GothicBlack (268) writes:
*soaking in the silence* i cant say anything, i enjoyed this too much. it hit deep... ~gothic~


On Thursday June 19th, 2003, Six-Out (1821) writes:
What aurora said. No words can say how much I felt this.


On Thursday June 19th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:
wow.....


On Thursday June 19th, 2003, Armand (73) writes:
an exercise in similes and metaphors executed brilliantly around the central sea theme, once again affirming your DP diva status.


On Thursday June 19th, 2003, Raze Drake (103) writes:
I could help but remain silent after I read this.........and I still can't think of anything to say, but that I felt this one Cre, I really did.


On Saturday June 21st, 2003, boughtwithblood (295) writes:
this took me right to the grey cold sea, cre, i'm awed.



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