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Plastic ballerina
In your pink and plastic dress
I brought the world to you
and I confess
Never once did I consider
That perhaps in your plastic way
You preferred the closed-up night
To my bright and plastic day
Plastic ballerina
I watched you spinning round
In your pink and plastic tutu
To a tinkling tinny sound
I played that it was music
And assumed you liked it too
Although never once in all those years
Did I think to stop and ask you
Plastic ballerina
The days grew into years
And you collected dust
While I collected fears
You chipped away in pieces
And the notes dropped from your song
Save one that kept repeating
As you gamely tripped along
Plastic ballerina
In your pink and plastic box
I'll give you back the night now
And forever close the lock
Goodnight ballerina
This shall be our final glance
In your pink and plastic coffin
You'll be free to never dance.



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On Wednesday February 28th, 2007, prettydisgrace (142) writes:
i really like this,its a beauty...(too many people wrote beautiful,but u know wot i mean ;)


On Sunday January 28th, 2007, Instant Insanity (754) writes:
so beautiful... ][ ][


On Monday October 30th, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (106) writes:
(CLAPS)........(CHEERS) beautiful


On Monday September 5th, 2005, precarious pixie (20) writes:
Bravo.beautiful doesn't even come close to a word that describes the worth of this poem.i love it.Encore...


On Thursday July 21st, 2005, Lotophagi (451) writes:
this is such a beautiful moment.... I can't leave a comment worth this beauty. so, thank you.


On Wednesday June 1st, 2005, Soulfire (115) writes:
aaa..momma's baby is all grown up....love the poem.


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Wounded (22) writes:
The compassion, the way you feel transfered to the doll and how she may feel and setting her free from torment is beautiful!


On Friday March 25th, 2005, An Expired Member (29) writes:
A beauty of your creation. How I love Ballerinas, dazzeling poem. Thanx


On Friday March 4th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1245) writes:
This is still as beautiful as it was the first time i read it..


On Thursday February 17th, 2005, An Expired Member (24) writes:
wow. You know when something is just so gorgueos? you don't know what to do or say? well this is such a poem. Beautifully written and felt. Just beautiful.


On Sunday February 6th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (321) writes:
wow all i can manage...wow -kitty


On Thursday January 13th, 2005, Im_going_to_cry_now (24) writes:
I want to bear your children


On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, Philla (141) writes:
Excuse me while I go re read this repeatedly


On Monday December 27th, 2004, island warrior (303) writes:
Cool poem I envy your talent.


On Saturday December 25th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
...wow *speecheless* You never fail to please Jane. ~Ryan


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
wow, this was written so well. you definatly presented this poem perfectly. i really like this work.


On Wednesday October 13th, 2004, An Expired Member (55) writes:
i love that last line... i remember as a kid i had one of those musical baoxes with the plastic ballerina inside, and i always felt bad for her... maybe it was because she was trapped...


On Sunday June 13th, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:
I love this piece. Its written so delicately. You've done a great job. -Glass


On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
wow...gorgeous... i like how you did the poem in pink it all fits together...beautiful~ss


On Saturday April 10th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:
want to hear something weird? I smelled plastic while reading this. Guess this poem has to be pretty damn good if it has that affect on me. :::OLd


On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
We all seem to go through life feeling like a puppet dancing to a song and people around us think we're enjoying ourselves. What we really want is someone to just stop the music so we can stop pretending.


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
I think that this a really good pice of work. Excellent. Stunning. Beautiful. Words anot really express your feelings. Hugs and kissz.


On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Stunning. Absolutely beautiful, elegant and sad, fantastic work. ~L


On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, wilted (299) writes:
Lovely work. It leaves me with an indescribable feeling...


On Friday February 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
good i really like it good good good *~H0pe~*


On Sunday February 1st, 2004, Lemons (57) writes:
I love this poem more than my mom. And I love her an awful lot.


On Sunday February 1st, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:
lol.. cool comment


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:
I will allways love reading this.. *Hugs Cre*


On Sunday January 25th, 2004, Griffin (135) writes:
great write.... because i cant give anything constructive, really good though


On Thursday November 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:
Nice, nice....its almost a genie of the lamp kind of thing


On Saturday August 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (13) writes:
oh wow. this work is outstanding. love the rhyming and tempo but most of all the message it conveys. cheers to a great poem. ~true


On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, alone (199) writes:
this is one for the fav list...wonderful write!


On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, Bast (896) writes:
oh wow, cre... just... wow. i have a music box... and it makes me cry... it plays "Memories" from CATS... and god... that, and this, makes me wistful for a childhood i never really had.


On Monday June 30th, 2003, celestine_moon (53) writes:
i keep coming back to this one. so sad and elegant. it trips along in my mind and paints the most enchanting picture. i just love it. -moon


On Friday June 27th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
this is one of the coolest poems ive read in a while. it is a strange thing to ponder about the memory of a childhood posession. You can't ever really appreciate anything until you look back on it years down the line. I like how you captured this in th


On Friday June 27th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
this simple, yet deep poem. :)


On Wednesday June 25th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:
jane. you can pump out amazing poetry and have each piece be original. i respect you so much for that


On Thursday June 19th, 2003, ColdScaredAlone (121) writes:
ohh, i absolutely loved this. it could be interpreted on so many different levels! wow wow wow


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
Excellent subject matter and wonderful choice of words. How a doll would be so life-like...... The descriptors in this piece accented the mood nicely.


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, GothicBlack (268) writes:
well what else can i say that hasn't already been said? i just wanted to let you know, i enjoyed this as much as everyone else... amazing ~gothic~


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, shadowsinthelight (211) writes:
Cre, you write with such a graceful ease and elegance, but this saddened me. The plastic ballerina's soul purpose for being was to dance for you. S.


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
This is wonderful! Metaphorically speaking you are brilliant in this. I could simply dive in to the lake of concepts I've gained from this well crafted talent. Wow...I love this one.~DW~


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
'tinkling tinny sound" this poem makes me think of Edgar Allen Poe; great read, great poem...


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:
Um...yea, what doc said. I love this piece. One day, I'm going to kill you, and steal your brain. I want to write like that. Grr, you piss me off. Blah!


On Wednesday June 18th, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
Hmmmm . very well typed and., curiously interesting : Correspondence; Yeah thats it. Excellent piece [D&A]


On Thursday June 19th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
strange... it was well-crafted.. but i'm not sure if i liked it or not...


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, baryl (7) writes:
that was amazing. i don't know what else to say, i just liked everything about it.



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